Great story! Hope u will post more rin obito stories!

O-Obito ;-; *glomps*

Nice fanfic

Hm. I really love this, but wouldn't it be weird to have this in my favourites? I mean, it kind of IS Obito's masturbation history, among other stuff.
But still, you're so on point here ... it's simply perfect! Yes, I really like this. Every sentence is perfect. I'm all for Obito Introspection! What I like especially is how it doesn't culminate in romance, instead moving from blue-eyed shortsightedness to ... what became of Obito. It's only realistic. I also find interesting how Obito, looking back on his former self, finds his own actions mundane and beneath Rin. (that's just so telling ... in so many ways!)
Yeah, I think you fleshed out his transformation pretty well. You know, a lot of stuff that's implied in canon but never mentioned. When it comes to Obito's time in the village for example. We know he had a hard time, but HOW hard is not that clear yet. But it must have been something to shape him so profoundly even before he landed in that cave.
Well, I'll stop rambling now.
Awesome fic!

This was so good!
Keep on writing!

BEAUTIFUL

Oh god...I have never ever, NEVER EVER read a story on a guy discovering his own errection and finding Masturbation, infact as a guy I must say even if I don't remember this stuff with myself too well, it felt awkwardly farmiliar.
The Zetsus...Oh god PURE GOLD. Definetly in need for more "Zetsu learns about humanity by Obito Uchiha" moments.
It was down right epic...the part "Why don't you just stick it into her ?"...I never laughed infront of my PC because of Fiction. TODAY I DID.

The darker side about Obito's life, the post "Awakening" of Tobi (That's what I like to call Rin's death) and his coping with it years later, (I loved the phrasing, that it felt divorced from him) whatever you do for a living, I hope it's writing, if its not its probably wasted.
His disgust with his younger self's urges, whises and fantasies is so perfectly human and upon further thought relatable and common that it seems genious and unused.

That he is alone now with nothing but a scar Rin heald to remind him of tenderness, that she was in his mind the only one who cared if he was there, (in hillarious contradiction to some Devi pics you made*) is priceless, not priceless in a "omg I laughed so hard" but "Oh my lord, this is so wonderfully written it is priceless".
Drunk Deidara was a nice idea, what if he saw Tobi head off with a purchasable lady ?!
Food for thought perhaps ?

That a person, who is the exact opposite from Rin would say something to him that she said, that was not only perfectly "climatic" even but, just heavy.
I have always liked the Obito Rin stories you made, this one is starting to become my favorite and I preety much know I will print it in a few hours because I will not be able to sleep withouth a re-read.

*The one where Deidara talked to Obito about having died for his non-exsistent love life.

Whoa, now with this I must say, I am not only looking forward to your next uploads but als pics.

/Anbusquadleader

Wow ! This was..amazing well more than amazing I cant even find the right words... It was so sweet and full of so much angst, Im so glad I gave this fic a chance, I love it.

Shy and awkward Obito masturbating to pictures of Rin is actually the best thing ever. His love for her is so heart-breakingly beautiful and you do them wonderful justice with your stories. I've only started reading your stories, but I absolutely love your characterization of everyone and your style of writing.

This was sad and just wonderful... The "A Long Way Home" universe gives me so much hope. And so I can enjoy those sad stories, too :D

Pretty awesome story. Nobody writes Obito/Rin like you do. I love how you always bring out Obito's feelings. It seems very in-character to me although he has changed quite a bit. Oh and that scene with Rin's picture... that was exactly what I thought could have been going on after we've seen that scene from the manga.

I totally love it! That was really hot, I've always think the idea of Obito masturbating while imagines Rin, even when he's an adult, he conservates her photos and uses them for... ya' know ./.
The part when Obito gives sexual education to the zetsus was priceless xD, and then when they're making out was very cute, I felt very happy for him. I would like the idea of Obito having sex with the hooker but imagine Rin instead the hooker, like he relieves all the sexual tension that he has with Rin, but it was really cute that he couldn't do it with her because of Rin.

I loved all the feeling that you put on it. Rin was not only his childish crush, was his best friend, he was a completely looser but there she was, cheering him up and trusting on his dreams. Then he lost her and he went all mad.

Well done!

(Sorry if my english sucks -.-)

Hi there,
I really like your stories. After reading "A long way home" about two months ago I decide to read some of Naruto manga and I must say it's quite intresting. I don't watch anime (being busy because of exams and other stuff related to veterinary medicine). I'm looking forward for another sketches/stories :)