| Reviews for To Spare His Heart |
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Treedweller chapter 7 . 2/27 Aw, that was sweet! Thank you |
writeallnight chapter 7 . 12/29/2019 You weren't kidding about the sugary sweetness lol! So glad these two are back together again! |
writeallnight chapter 6 . 12/29/2019 Yoda. So helpfully unhelpful as per always. Hoping these two can sort things out on their own! |
writeallnight chapter 5 . 12/29/2019 Oooh. Now Qui-Gon is sad. These two! Always struggling with their communication skills. It's enough to drive you crazy! |
writeallnight chapter 4 . 12/29/2019 Ooh nice imagery with the plant being broken at the same time as Obi-Wan's heart. My heart is also broken for him. Hoping Qui-Gon gets better soon so they can fix things! |
writeallnight chapter 3 . 12/29/2019 Yay! Obi-Wan being commended for his actions is amazing! He's such a good Jedi. |
writeallnight chapter 2 . 12/29/2019 Ugh. Devastating. Qui-Gon trying to keep Obi-Wan safe and Obi-Wan trying to take care of his master. They are a disaster of a pair aren't they? Loving it! |
writeallnight chapter 1 . 12/29/2019 Oh these two. Qui-Gon always pushing the limits and Obi-Wan always being over cautious. You've put them into their roles really well in this story. Poor Obi-Wan is so sad though. Hoping things get fixed for both of them! |
AnOldStarWarsFan chapter 7 . 2/2/2018 I know ,you write the story a long time ago! But I have to say thanks for that wonderful story about Obi Wan and Qui Gon! I'm impressed in your writing-skills! I know my English is bad because I'm from Germany and I'm 14 years old! :) I understand not all but the most of the English words and it was soo fantastic! Thank you very much and the force will be with you! |
Corina chapter 7 . 3/31/2017 Thank you sooo much, I am so damn in love with the JA series and this is so awesome. What I mostly need is represented by such moments of character analisys |
silverleaf321 chapter 7 . 1/5/2017 this one is soooooo goooood. |
ApollosHarmony chapter 7 . 12/18/2016 Wow what an amazing story! The ending was great! :) |
meldahlie chapter 1 . 9/19/2016 I just drop by this fic now and again when I need something warm and happy, with the right touch of angst to bring it all out. :) I know you felt it was mushy, but it's the sort of mush I always need after watching Phantom Menace, so thanks for keeping it up here on FFN! :) |
happygiraffe01 chapter 7 . 4/2/2016 Old or not, I really enjoyed this story. I know it's predictable but sometimes I just want to drown in fuzzy feels and forget about whether a story is particularly unique or profound. This is the kind of story that I can just sit back and enjoy without overthinking, and ride the emotional coaster to the inevitable happy resolution with my favorite characters. Thanks for posting! XX |
Eryniel Alasse chapter 7 . 12/30/2015 I liked this story very much. You have a pleasant writing style, one that is descriptive but not overboard on details. You also capture the high emotions – particularly in chapter seven – with an ease that would make many lesser writers go green with envy. As you said, the plot is rather predictable and common, but pleasant all the same. You're also right that this doesn't spark a whole lot of contemplative thought, and yet it still was a well-spent half hour. Thank you very much for writing this! |