Dear Naomi,

you wrote a wonderful chapter here! I loved how tender it was written, the scenes in the moonlight, Sephiroth's beautiful hair, him siling...Thank you!
It is so seldom for him to have happiness in fanfictions that every Moment is a Moment to treasure! Did he ever had a happy Moment in canon?

Um, I hate to tell you this, but you posted the wrong chapter here. This is a chapter for your Danny Phantom fic.

I thought Sephiroth got the materia later in the game. First time in northern crater as you hand it to a non active character ro hold.

don't they fight jenova in the mansion too?

nice showing how hes controlling the clones.

seems fast paced but tgen Sephiroth isn't waiting around.

just wondering is this the 'Real' Sephiroth or one of Hojos clones? since in game the real body in crystal mako in the cave in the crster.

who missed a few chapters here my bad. He's got dual personality here I presume.

you do know its sephiroth who's controlling Jenova. it was stated by the games crwators a few years ago.
if jenova was controlling him woild she allow him to tear her body apart?

I suppose he could just be playing along here as he did let cloud/tifa live where jenova would have just killed them just for being there.. hes allowing her to believe shes in control.

Reeve developed Cait Sith as if you play dirge of cerberus you'll see reeves a master at electronics..

I believe ShinRa forced/convinced reeve to use cait as a spy.

everything else seems accurate.

Waoooo. More *-*

moreeeeeeeeeeeeee

Loving what's been written so far! Incredible way to write Sephiroth and get into his human side. It makes his story even more tragic. I think it's also really fresh to have it written in his first perspective too. You really captured Cloud's personality too (nervous and keeps to himself). I thought the promise part was really heartwarming.

Ha, I remember when I first loaded onto this site that I did the same mistake. I swear, the uploading of chapters in this site, especially when you're also loading several other stories, can get annoying sometimes. :P.

Lastly, ignore the homophobe/yaoi hater here. I really hate it when reviewers focus only on the gender relationships than the STORY itself. It's challenging enough to write a story and put your heart into it, only to have a douche insist the content is trash. Leaving a comment like that is the stuff disgruntled brats do. Just because it's yaoi doesn't make it 'trash'. There are some really top-notch quality works here that are yaoi. Great literature is not limited to male/female stories. Anyway, I recommend putting a yaoi warning, just so you can avoid more douche comments like that. ;) You definitely don't need to deal with that bull.

Site will not let me review the same chapter twice apparently so I would like to say that I very much like the way you portrayed Sephiroth before the Nibelheim reactor incident. Can't wait for the next installment!

Okay, you got me hooked. :)

Please mark yaio on the short summary.. I skimmed the chapters at the top and got to the kissing and felt sick.. why do you fell the need to write this yaio garbage. I'd have skopped if you put yaio in the description btw..

This appears to be a Kingdom Hearts story and not a Final Fantasy VII story.