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jj chapter 1 . 10/10/2017 loved your old Kaiba! So cute |
croquant chapter 1 . 7/29/2013 Liver spots on the gloriously taut glowing skin of Seto Kaiba? Never! Enjoyed the story very much. Thanks for uploading! |
harinezumiko chapter 1 . 2/5/2013 Yay androids. Whole lotta robot lovin' goin' on this round! Now where do I sign up to get my very own Set? :D |
Crystia chapter 1 . 2/3/2013 EEEEEP! Those poor employees. AHHH, the tabloid better not get a hold of that story! It was a massage, a MASSAGE! XD Ahahahahahahahaha. That being said, this was friggin' HILARIOUS. I can even overlook the fact that you took my favorite character, turned him into an old geezer, and paired him with a robot. That just TELLS you how awesome this was. XD My favorite line? "Not unless this 'desk job' of which thou speaketh of involves smiting monsters." PFFFFFT. His other lines, too, but that one in particular. Reminds me of that line in Pharaoh's throne, where's he's all like, "Now, begone knave, or I shall smite thee with my Millennium Rod!" *snorts* I'm STILL laughing, and it's my second time through. XD Anywayyy, I think you justified well Kaiba keeping Set around. Not over the top at all, so nice job there. I love how you write Kaiba! Why don't you write him moooreeeee... *whiiiine* I don't even know what to say aside from repeating that it's awesome, it's awesome, it's super-special-chocolatey-fudge-coated AWESOME. The power of friendship indeed. Congrats on getting both your fics submitted! I believe I've run out of things to say, because if I continue, you'd just get awed garble. ADDFKSAJLDFKD this was good. XD -Crystia |
literalspoon chapter 1 . 2/3/2013 The following was written under the influence of the sugar high I like to get on when writing; you have been warned in advance. ;) Aaaaandroids, everybody needs good aaaandroiiiiids! Aaaaandroiiiids, should be good and should be trueee! Aaaandroiiiids, though they're only made of meeetaaaal... Androids have feeeeliiiiings, tooooo... *stops singing* Yeah, you're not expected to recognize that or anything. Hooray for obscure references to ancient shows people have never heard of! :D Anyway, great to see you managed to write this up in the end - pretty sure I said this on the other review, but I've been stalking the story posting thread, keeping tabs on what's going on. With this, you have made Spooner very, very happy. Power of friendship, ladies and gentlemen! Ohhh, where to start with this? The concept... the start... that near-scandalous endingwhichwassimilartosomet hingIpulledinaLampoonedonesh otawhilebackonlywaybetter... Everythings... Gwaah, my mind is utterly blown. Please allow me to say a few mildly incomprehensible things at this point: Maximas tibi gratias ago! Valde bona! You be genius, I be bowing! Now that's out of my system - I have to say, I love the tone you were going for with this, it worked out very well here. And man, you even managed to keep Seto IC! My favourite parts would have had to have been Set-bot's lines, though. Many lulz were had with lines such as "Here ist thine coffee, Sir Boss.", and of course that semi-Noodle Incident with the coffee machine. There's some things that work best when you have to imagine them - this is definitely one of those, XDD. ...Dammit, just realized that I'm going to have to watch my back when it comes to writing clever humor - looks like I could have some very serious competition on my hands here. Or downright hilarious competition, either way counts. Though, since I don't compete per se... Hmm, I wonder what that makes it. Aaaand that's all I have to say. Any more, and I'm going to end up making even more of an idiot of myself than I already have with my sugar-powered overenthusiasm. Best of luck for the round, mate! _ |