Great job on the story, it was great and was super funny, keep up the great work and keep on writing. :)

I loved it!I laughed my ass of in this story Don reminded me of Sheldon Cooper from Big Bang theory

my god that was hilarious! I'm dying, best ending ever!

XD

Oh come on, how can someone ignore this good strory?

Bwahahahaha love this story.. can't stop laughing..

Okay, that was pretty funny! AWESOME!

This had to be one of the funniest things i have ever read. the dialogue was so funny and it just kept getting better and better. I wonder though how raph is going to go about him nearly being hit by a train to leo, that would be a heck of a conversation.

Lol... I meant to put an honorable mentions to you in my ‘how many will it take?’ story. For giving me the inspiration to write it. I was laughing so hard I couldn’t stand up and had completely forgotten to leave a comment. I’m glad I found it again, this story is just inspiring all around. I love your work.

OMG! My sides are killing me from laughing

THIS IS ONE OF THE FUNNIEST THING I'VE EVER READ!

this way too freaking hilarious! I laughed so hard and it just kept getting better and better! Amazing job!

Love it! i love how Don was acting funny. Hope to read more of him like that. Keep writing.

BWAHAHAHA! Son of a Bishop! I love it! Can't say iv ever liked shell as a wanna be curse but i'll give ya Bishop, its a good one.

also, I'm pretty sure I read a 'slowly the bar dudes backed away slowly' in there somewhere...ok I probably didn't read dude but there where defiantly 2 slowlys after chika pulled out the shotgun.

Oh Donnie and his Doctor Who references XD

Let me start by saying you have amazing characterization, and the dialogue is positively hilarious! I love this little story, it's silly and fun while also having some serious moments and a closer look at certain characters, specifically Leo, Don and unique scenario was refreshing as well.

Now, might I make a couple suggestions? The first is just to go back through and fix up the typos (I know this is just written for fun, but the story would be even better without those!). Secondly, have you considered breaking this up into chapters? By dividing it into sizeable chunks, it would facilitate the overall reading, because this was occasionally difficult to follow with the varied perspectives, locations and time periods.

In the spirit of a true compliment sandwich, here's another bit of praise: I loved the ending XD Don's reaction to Mikey's version of the night was too funny and I almost feel sorry for the poor little turtle; but let's be honest - he had it coming.

Thanks for posting, this was a joy to read!

The Light of Reason