pure cuteness.
It really should have gone in that direction, even without the smoochies. Would have changed a lot. And I mean A LOT

hey, love the story. Quick question though. What episode did Buffy complain about the lack of detail in the watcher's diaries recountings of slayers' final battles? I can't remember

*wistful sigh* Ah, B/G goodness! So of the good! I especially liked that Buffy fell in love with Giles on her 18th birthday. That episode seems like one of the best times for it.

very very sweet. liked that giles was lealous of wes

Very emotional, liked it lots. Wouldn't change a word(Now for the but-face)but, far . .

Your audience, for the most part, is quite literate and able to discern the emotional gravity of the situation. It's obvious you're trying to convey pauses that happen in such conversation. Some '...' might even be better. A bit more pleasing to the eye, and less brain stuttering.

Amazing! Wonderful! Thank you!

I love how you write BG!

The characterization of Buffy and Giles is just perfect!

This is how the ep should have gone!

Awww! Very sweet. I like your version of it. Thanks for reviewing my story!

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byrdgirl

What a wonderful fiction and such a marvelous antidote to all the B/S out there. doesn't have enough B/G fictions, to my way of thinking. The voices sound just right and there are only a few minor spelling errors. You make the declarations of love from Buffy and Giles sound completely natural. Let's have more B/G.

buffy and giles is just gross!, but, great story, anyway!

Wow, you really like your B/G, don't ya? Glad there's more of us out there... The ending left a resounding "Awww!". More please! What about the second Giles-return in "Grave"? I'd wager you could work wonders with it :D