:D:D:D

ngl i love this chapter bc it had surprised me with the appearance of petunia but also how it shows a different side to her

Read the above and just wanted to leave my thoughts: Your story is particularly captivating. Slytherin!Harry stories are a dime a dozen, some good some bad. But recently I had a craving for a story that takes canon Harry, as he was at 11 years old and place him in Slytherin. I chanced upon your story and am hooked. The way Harry develops from the Harry we saw in the first book to the one in 6th year now. There are alot of elements in your story that I would normally shy away from and frankly it's your skill as a writer that makes this nevertheless captivating and easy to read. So thanks for posting this story.

I love your story Theodore is so bad at expressing himself and very possessive of harry and I adore how to harry had to blackmail Theo too get him to date him
great story
-Ariadne Cassiopeia Aeterna

I've had a bit of a feeling all throughout the story that Theodore has either some minor mental illness(es) or that he has a mild form of autism, like myself. His habit of omitting subjects at the beginnings of sentences and around conjugated verbs is something I've definitely heard somewhere (but it could have been a cooking magazine for all I remember), or he just could be translating his thoughts directly from Spanish. He also exhibits some of my own traits as a fourteen-year-old, but although I definitely had a traumatic childhood, it doesn't hold a candle to his, and I wouldn't be the only person out there who exhibits said traits in various ways or aspects of life.
I've been binge-reading for quite a while, and for anything to hold my ADHD-impaired attention for more than an hour is quite rare. The fact that I've been reading this over the span of two days is indicative of how much I like it. Great work!

It wpuld be an better Story if Tom/Voldemort is Harrys Grandfather and could have redemption!

cool story. could need a retouch tho.

Honestly how can so many like Harry when he is an inbecile, I am for the dark lord he is intelligent. How J;K Rowling could make him lose I don't know

Amazing story! An absolute masterpiece!

Good chapter!

i cant believe it, there's a 100 chapters out... i missed this story so much

This is beautiful!

Well I loved it all until this last chapter... I didn't mind when you used scenes of the books because they were majors scenes or maybe it would have been pointless to rewrite it (and it's your write after all) but for this last chapter, I think you should have put more of you and less of J.K. But I still loved this fanfiction *-* Maybe I would ask you I could translate it to french... But I don't have much time yet (studies kill...)

Hope you are well :D

lupin did not give back the map to harry?

come on the supposed traitor is gryffindor!, not matter if is black or pettigrew. remus as his patetic coward self. worst gryff ever.