Reviews for Laws of Motion
Guest chapter 1 . 8/6/2019
I really love this. Oh, the angst! It's so wonderful!
Guest chapter 22 . 1/5/2016
Why is this the first I've stumbled on this fic? It's so freaking good! Keep the chapters coming!
RogueWarden chapter 21 . 12/30/2015
I love your story, the writing is wonderful and you did an amazing job at capturing the characters, but goddammit did u have to make me cry.
Jules Hawk chapter 20 . 9/14/2015
Well Shepard and Kaidan aren't the only one's tearing up. The depth of emotion in this chapter was wonderful, perfect in the way they came together and painful at the thought of this being the last time they see each other.

Their love is so real and I hope they get to carry through with that proposal. I would love to see these two without the threat of death and war hanging over their heads. I really love the way you write them.

That bit with Anderson had me chuckling at Shepard trying to come up with excuses but not needing too. Nice touch and a beautiful chapter.
Inthannon chapter 19 . 4/1/2015
I only started playin ME a little while ago and staryed reading fanfic soon after. I'm loving this story! Please continue soon!
Guest chapter 19 . 3/8/2015
I was hoping that you would update soon! This was a lively chapter and it's nice to see that Shepard and Kaidan have finally broken down the wall and talked. :)
Sones chapter 18 . 12/19/2014
I really enjoy reading your story, i think you captured the characters' personality really well, and express their emotions perfectly, also
thanks to your fic I'm going to name one of my shepard after yours, Reila is a beautiful name!
But it has been months since you've last updated, are you going to continue it ? I really hope so, I also hope you are ok, it seems you didn't wrote anything in a while. (Sorry for the mistakes English isn't my native language:))
Guest chapter 18 . 12/19/2014
What a time to stop writing :'(
geoavenger chapter 18 . 5/31/2014
I like this story. You've done a good job with it. Pretty angsty but it makes sense. Kudos.
KeraD91 chapter 18 . 5/30/2014
Awesome chapter I can't wait for more
Jules Hawk chapter 17 . 2/2/2014
God this is heartbreaking, fantastic but heartbreaking. The unresolved tension between them makes me want to yell and shout at them between the tears I'm crying.

Great work and looking forward to the rest of it, however it goes. (keeping my fingers crossed for a happy ending ;p)
KeraD91 chapter 17 . 2/2/2014
Wow this chapter was amazing, I couldn't stop reading it! Good job!

Update soon! I'm anxious for Kaiden and Relia!
Sidnika chapter 16 . 1/27/2014
I just read this and it's great! You write the characters really well, hope you update soon!
KeraD91 chapter 16 . 1/5/2014
I've always had a crush on garrus he's so soft hearted lol

Update soon!
Guest chapter 16 . 1/5/2014
I hope the next chapter is out soon. Along with the shenko. :)
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