Hopefully the Queen died or dies, same for phillipus. Normally I'm pro amazon but had to have sympathy for people who kill babies

Love the story so far but the last part of this chapter Makes no sense, Kal has a very good idea of what happens to male babies, looks and sees Diana is carrying a male baby and he just like "well, head on back to the Captial full of people who kill male babies, no worries"

This was intense. Frustrating. Depressing. Enthralling and all around fascinating read.

You write a gripping and well written story. Had my attention from beginning to end. Well done. Thank you for sharing this with us.

Phineas Potter and Merope? i smell something Potter-ish here hmmmm

Seriously? I get the story purpose and all that, but Clark is supposed to be freaking intelligent. How long does it take for him to know that they kill boy children?

The sudden jump to seven months... makes no sense. He already knows that the visitors only stay for a month or so.

you better have some body kill batman and these other duds off. I would prefer that kal did it.

I kind of like your story so far, but it would be better if you consider the intelligence of the Kryptonian better than this. He would not that easily fell into some kind of trap like this and I don't believe that, with his "Lighting Speed" which can compared to the Flash, Superman would not be able to evade the Herc's club. Should give some more effort into this captivation plan. Other than that I still enjoy the story. Thanks for sharing the fic.

An exciting ending to an exciting story. You made a typo, though. Clark greets Lois' mom as 'Mrs. Kent'.

Congrats on a wonderfully told story. Epic.

Awesome last chapter, seems Lois knows Supes Identity, and it also seems hippolyta isn't dead but trapped in Carcosa with Cassilda(creepy part with the painting of them though).. Cant wait for the sequel to be up.

...Wow! what a story; You gave us the whole nine yards there. Truly spectacular story-telling; Loved it all. I'm really at a loss for what else to say, now that the saga is over, except - BRING ON THE SEQUEL (after you've taken your well-deserved bow ;D). Robardin gave me the creeps, so I'm glad he's dead, and iinntteerreessttiinngg...with Lois and the other...girls, General's gonna be so happy - (not) - with that one, I'm sure. Lois' payback on Clark...that's not one I wanna miss, lolol.

And there it is... I kinda like the thought of Diana more or less leading a new 'tribe' of Amazons from outside.

Nice! Love how this ended. Though I do hope Lois doesn't go overboard. I know she feels the need to "get back" at Clark, but she brought it on herself for not seeing it years ago. It was her own damn fault. And its not like Clark told anyone what she thought about Superman on a personal nature. She should also realize its not jealousy that Diana feels, but rather a sense to protect her husband's dignity, and will run Lois through if she tries to destroy even a piece of it.

Personally, I would have preferred Diana punch Lois in the throat as a warning, and get the point across to shut that thrill seeking side of Lois up. But that's me.

Good story.

I thought Lois was gay in your story, if she is how could you have thoughts of Superman?

Looking forward to reading the sequel.