Update PLEASE

Yes this chapter rocked but when will the next update be in curious

When will you update i miss your update its been years

YOU need to finish this

This has to be one of the most brilliant fictions I have ever seen for an AU. It's believable, in-character, and absolutely full of the FEELS! If I had written or watched an alternate ending on what would have happened if Heather hadn't tricked Alejandro, THIS would be exactly it and more! Please do write more of this story.

Dude...pretty pretty PRETTY pleeeeeaaassseee continue this fic! U got me into TDS (do we call it TDS, or just TD, or total drama series, whatever) fanfiction, and u write awesomely well! I seriously hope you haven't discontinued it nd that u get this review... but u should know I really love this fic as well as 'The hardest part of this is leaving you' though u haven't really finished that either... The suspense is KILLING me...oh, nd I LOVED ur fic 'a piece of Rosalie Hale' I know its the wrong place to say it, but I'm scared u wouldn't get it if I said it in that fanfic review...ANYWAY, just...update, I mean, I'm in South Africa...waiting for u
Khathi

OMG this was amazing mind blowing.

hurry up!

This is the best fic for them I've read in forever! You've done a fantastic job at making them totally in character, so keep up the great work!

This is actually quite a cute piece - I'm a sucker for AUs in general, and even though I'm not really a huge pairing nut, I've been on a huge Heather and Alejandro kick lately. My interest is certainly piqued, to say the least, so I'm curious to see what direction you choose to go in from here; I have to admit that I am a bit torn on how I feel about some of the events in earlier chapters, but given your author's notes at the end of this one, I'm sure it will all have some sort of relevance later on.

Regardless, good luck with this story - I look forward to the next update!

Haha love this story so much and you're such a funny person. Anyway, I really like the pace of the story and how you're taking their relationship slow, covering just about all that every relationship goes through. Hope you update soon.

Tell me you break them up as your twist. :P

Ugh, Alejandro was such a jerk. Why would he flirt with that waitress? There didn't even seem to be any point. Poor Heather must have felt awful, especially since it was her birthday. :(

Glad to see that Alejandro felt guilty about it, though.

Good job! I can't wait to read more! Heather is hilarious. :P

-Green

I know! Alejandro is supposed to like Heather but then he pulled that cruel stunt! I just wish they'd kiss again already!

Oh and your story's really good! Heather and Alejandro are actually in character - lots of authors write them as lovestruck teenagers and make them all mushy.

Wow what most dramatic chapter I have read so far! Heather and Alejandro fight can be funny at time when Alejandro tease or making her feel jealous with around girls but Alejandro need to watch his limit with Heather or else he will never get another chance with her again which is rather sad. Oh Alejandro need to change few things about himself with bad habits of flirting with girls and his arrogant thinking yourself first if you don't then your relationship will not last very long for sure. Oh Heather this type situations I do not blame you for it however it was quite childish how your deal your problem behaving by immaturity but glad in end you able to come with your sense to order keep your relationship standing. I do wishes Heather a Happy Birthday. It quite sad when Heather family do not celebrate on their daughter birthday by not much loved toward her family I can see so much neglect from Heather I can understand why Heather have such cruel nature. I do hope Heather forgive Alejandro and understanding that no one is perfect so it bet both of them try talk throughly in compromise to make each other happy! It was very dramatic, emotional and quite shock chapter! way to go! I can wait for next chapter to come! you are awesome! Things are getting interesting!

PS I glad to know that Heather do know some cooking even is dessert maybe she bake Alejandro as return he did for him.?

You can take as long as you need to update because when you do, everything is always amazing. this chapter was sad and amusing all at the same time. I laughed about the waitress and the apple. This was really good.