Reviews for The surprise
Vorcha Girl chapter 2 . 2/16/2016
Oh this is so good! I loved it! I mean I did read it on Tumblr, but I loved it even more the second time around. James is a like a big kid! :D
Ethelbell Bellethel chapter 1 . 2/5/2016
Oh, my... Talk about a surprise ! I totally love the idea of EDI playing elevator music during the ride ! Poor Garrus and Kaidan... I know how they feel.
Jules Hawk chapter 2 . 2/1/2016
If this is throwing together bring it on. Loved it and you had me laughing out loud - almost snorted my coffee. Nothing wrong with adding to old stories, especially if this is the outcome.

I could just imagine James loving the mako and riding with Shepard. Kaidan and Garrus - just perfect, I was in the room with them feeling Kaidan's smugness and Garrus struggling to find an excuse. Poor Tali, Garrus has a lot to make up for.

Fantastic piece as always.
ShameTheRedRose chapter 1 . 1/30/2015
Oh yeah! Nice! Ah, we love that Mako. Yes we do...Ahem...DON'T we, boys?

Boys?

*Has to peel Kaidan and Garrus off the elevator door and drag them over to check it out.

That was great.
AngstyShenko chapter 1 . 1/30/2015
Yessssss. Shepard and her Mako. It is beautiful! The buildup on this was top-notch and the payoff glorious. I LOVED Kaidan and Garrus' reactions. They were spot on. I find your sense of humor similar to mine :D
Kirsah chapter 1 . 1/28/2015
Lol!
I absolutely love Kaidan's and Garrus' reaction after Joker delivers the message. I can just see them sprinting towards the elevator! And their reaction to the Mako itself - I'm still grinning.
It seems all Shepards love the Mako (I know mine do) and (almost) all squadmates dread having to ride in it with Shep.
Vorcha Girl chapter 1 . 1/14/2015
This was great! I laughed so hard at the big reveal at the end! Bravo, my friend!
Negrath chapter 1 . 2/2/2013
ingenious. :D
indeed, with a mako back on normandy, planet-exploration would once more become an intolerable torture-chamber. :P
As it should be. ;) :D
Jules Hawk chapter 1 . 1/29/2013
Lol - so true, gotta love that Mako. It's all Joker's fault really, he always seems to drop you on a mountain! ;p
Wyolake chapter 1 . 1/24/2013
Very funny! Great little scene :)
Sh411th chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
Ah, the Mako. This exactly how I imagine Shepard if she got her hands on another. Excellent job!
MoiraM chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
Haha! Nice! Cute, sweet and to the point. Love it!
I remember thinking, when I was playing through ME1 the first time that I could just imagine the squad mates screaming in horror as we drove around ground side and them drawing short straws to see who had to go with Shepard in the Mako, or begging her to let someone else drive!
Thanks for bringing back those old ME memories! Well done. :)