AAAAAAAAH! More more more more! This is stinkin awesome! I love your writing! It’s absolutely amazing! Please continue this story- can’t wait to see how far this Pain guy will get in torturing our poor heros! Will Peter be next? Dick? Bruce? THE SUSPENSE IS KILLING ME!

good story but why do you have Avengers fanfiction(which is Marvel) and then DC characters as well? it doesn't make any sense.

superman is from DC..LOL

Um, hey! OK I know you haven't updated in a long time but I really think you should finish! Its pretty good and I like it! A lot of people do! So please continue this even if its been SO LONG since the last one! Bit I'll wait!
Bye

fellow nerd,
the quote is obviously from sherlock (DUH)
jim moriarty says it to sherlock in the third episode of the first season. its at the swimming pool when john watson is hooked up to the bomb. i recognied it as soon as i read it... next time can you get more of a challenge for me? thnx
samwise gamgee
(well im not sam, obviously, but sam is awesome so yeah)

scorpia never forgives, never forgets?

Sounds like anonymous, why?

You should continue this

Well, there is something I've noticed that's pretty glaring: You put down, say, Peter Parker's POV, yet continued to write in the third person. If you put down a given person's POV, then that means you have to write in the first person until you switch back to the third person. So, for instance, you wouldn't say "Bruce was jolted awake when something landed roughly on his arm." Instead, you'd say, "I was awakened when something landed roughly on my arm." That's first person, rather than the third person you seem to prefer.

Another thing is that if you have Batman there, then wouldn't he have been awakened before Hellboy was unceremoniously thrown into the cell? He prides himself on being such a great detective, and being vigilant. This is a case of someone getting caught with their pants down.

As for this Alex Rider, I'll freely admit I don't know who that is, but it strikes me as being very highly unlikely that someone barely out of his preteens would be an Agent with MI6. Who's his legal guardian? What's his schooling? And how could he possibly suspect Peter of being Spider-Man when Peter went out of his way to protect his identity? If he's with British Intelligence, they'd have no need of this information. American Intelligence (FBI and CIA, for instance,) may have need of it, but even that's a stretch, as SHIELD deals with the superheroes, hence the Avengers. It doesn't make any sense.

Speaking of not making sense, why would British Intelligence be raising a stink about an AMERICAN team? If they had concerns, why not raise them with SHIELD, FBI, or their American counterparts, the CIA?

This is so good! Please keep writing. See they actually going to get out?

When is the next chapter?

July 22 2013/

you havent updated in ages. ure killing me/ plz update plzzzzzzzzzzzzz

please update, almost been a year since you last updated

Is this story finished with or yeah? It's a great story and has kinda just been left for a while so yeah.

so wish you would update.

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