Interesting story, I liked that Momose was only trying to help and also that Kuon/Kyoko were together and hit and heavy for a while before actually going ‘all the way’. Thanks for sharing

Hotsu, hotsu! Lol. Great story. Loved it. Well-written and engaging. Thanks, again, for the read.

Yay! for resolution!

This chapter reads like a screenplay. Sweet dialogue.

They’re incredibly sweet. And your writing has a light, flowing quality to it. I really enjoy it.

Stories also show how hard it is spot know another’s thoughts. Assuming is natural and dumb when our views are so limited.

Daw. He doesn’t see how neatly he’s boxed himself in. Scary. Say your right words.

I’ve read so many stories and miscommunication is such a doozie. You’d think it’d be easier in real life, knowing from all those stories how important it is, to communicate. Because it’s so freakin important. But of course it’s not. Knowing isn’t action. The action’s the hard part.

It’s got an interesting flow I’ve never seen before. It’s very bittersweet.

I love this story. Thanks for sharing.

ME ENCANTO...gracias!

los quiero juntos...no sufriendo! casi me da un paro cardiaco cuando lei que Ren estaba con Momose...pobre Kyoko!

if i'm being honest, the style change was terrible and jarring. i was absolutely loving this story and devouring it as fast as i could, but that completely pulled me out of it and ruined the immersion. i kept thinking maybe Lory was writing a script or something, but it just kept going and i had to stop reading. your writing is so lovely, too, so it was really a shame. up until then it was beautiful and fantastic and i loved it.

You know, it has been a year plus since I've last read the manga. *cough*
But now, I'm excited to start reading it again all thanks to you, oh dear author~~~!

I enjoyed every bit of this. Even the change in style was to my liking. It was a good mix, I believe, perhaps because, in my opinion, you write very well. It was, dare I say, a bit of a ying and yang effect of writing styles. It is definitely not something just anyone call pull off. I suppose it is because your vocabulary goes beyond that of a teeny bopper fangirl, an emotional immature female, or anyone with childish notions. I don't mean to offend those types of people, but there is something to be said for writing that is a level well beyond those I mentioned.

I must admit, at first I was wondering why in the world Ren was with anyone that wasn't Kyoko and immediately hoped it was a misunderstanding or assumptions of the media, unsubstantiated rumors. Then I was hopping fake relationship. I was desperate to hope that this idiotic relationship with Mimose was but a farce and I has overjoyed that it was. The sexual orientation didn't bother me, although from what I gathered in the manga I have always thought that Mimose had a crush on Ren and after witnessing Kyoko's and Ren's close relationship gave up hope, but the crush still remains. Still, authors can take liberty to use characters to do their bidding and it's not like Mimose can't have her affections turned.

Anyhow, it was a decent amount of angst and not too stretched out. I really enjoyed when they finally were brought together. It really is about time that they started letting their feelings show through to each other so that one of them will finally make a move.

Thank you for sharing!