| Reviews for The Twins |
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   andjelija.nenic chapter 6 . 9/12/2017 Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$ |
| Guest chapter 13 . 11/27/2016 I love this story! It's a shame your not updating it anymore. I understand if you don't continue it I mean, I'm not a writer but I know the amount of stress writers like you go through. I'm impressed you wrote this much already I never could have. Well, even if you don't continue this story I hope you are still writing. Keep up the good work! |
| ObsessedwReading chapter 2 . 8/12/2016 Fantastic fanfiction and chapter. |
| ObsessedwReading chapter 1 . 8/12/2016 Wonderful job writing this. |
| TheSoakedSun chapter 13 . 6/13/2016 Update? |
| Guest chapter 4 . 10/5/2014 No actually Zukos kid is named Honera. |
| Songsplash chapter 12 . 9/2/2014 Can't wait for the next one. |
| Guest chapter 5 . 7/26/2014 We haven't seen Bolin's pet yet. He had a panda ferret mix called Pabu. He goes everywhere with Bolin. Its small enough to sit on his shoulder. Plus where's Tenzin's bison Oogi? You also forgot Korra's polar bear dog, Naga, who travels everywhere with her. She can fit on the bison because Oogi carried her on his back before during Harmonic Convergence. We didn't see Aang's pet lemurbat, Momo, either. He is with the group right? Plus Aang never introduced them to his loyal bison, Appa, |
| Guest chapter 12 . 6/9/2014 After this korra should teach aang how to go in and out if the avater sate |
| Yungsun chapter 12 . 6/6/2014 I love the Daughter bonding |
| The Classiest Trash chapter 12 . 6/6/2014 Aang Baldy Katarra Loopy Sokka Ponytail Tenzin Wrinkles Korra Sassy Lin Blind Bandit jr. or BBj just some names I could think of off the top of my head Enjoy! XD |
| dennis chapter 11 . 5/22/2014 more? |
| 00RedWing00 chapter 11 . 5/5/2014 Very well done! Some minor grammatical and spelling mistakes, but nothing harmful! Keep it going! But, if you could make the chapters a little bit longer that would be nice. Thanks! And continue with what you're doing! |
| Yungsun chapter 11 . 4/22/2014 Well someones coming to terms good chapter |
| irishauthor94 chapter 3 . 3/30/2014 Well... that reveal was contrived and kind of rushed... you could have easily just had one of the characters recall that historical fact in their head, as they wouldn't even know about Suki without knowing about her death. this story still looks interesting but you should really slow down a bit and plan out how you deliver info. |
