Amazing everyone is in character and this is amazingly written. Reads as seemlessly as watching an episode.

I thought I'd read all your stories, so imagine my delight to find that I hadn't! Must've got distracted by something else... Anyway, I loved this! I love the way you come up with original ideas and make them so convincing. I liked the way you brought in John's brother because it gave a different perspective on the whole scenario. Thank you!

"And his friends were very worried and felt very helpless. But they loved the Colonel, and he loved them. So they put him in a magic box to keep him safe and brought a magician to heal him when the box let him go. The magician magnified the power of the friends' love and brought the Colonel back to life."
John was blushing deeply and trying not to squirm. "Seriously," he muttered. "I want to know what happened."
So Teyla told him. But she liked her first version better.

I like Teyla's first version better, too :)

This is a superb story. I love the basis for it, the idea itself, of the stasis pod, and figuring out how to do the surgery to save him. I love the way you've structured it from the different points of view. I just love the heck out of this one. I'd hug you if I could for giving us such a gift!

I'm running out of new ways to say how INCREDIBLE your writing is! You should probably just get a thesaurus, look up "incredible", and apply them to yourself! Thank you so very,very much!

miracles do exist, even if only in the minds of the reader...

Wow! This was such a powerful piece! Although I knew John would recover, the journey to that end was mesmerizing. The depth of their loyalty and feeling for John was on full display. And to gav David in the mix, that made the story even better. Bravo!

Great story I loved it!

lovely story. nice interventions from all the team.

I think I held my breath through the whole chapter! Very, Very good. All of Carson's thoughts and preparations were excellent ... you captured him perfectly.

So good for Teyla to take David to see John ... nicely done scene. This was an excellent chapter.

Another great chapter. The interaction and conversations between Rodney and David were very good. Can't wait to finish this story but sadly it will have to be in the morning.

I love that Richard's main job is "not getting in the way". Hurry, hurry.

What a powerful chapter! He better not be dead though ... please.

Great story! Very intense and it kept my eyes glued to my phone the whole time. Thank you for this amazing story!
-whumplove

Wow! So intense and so good, fantastic job!