Hello.
Spanish reader here!
I want to say that I really love your story, and I was pretty sad to read, but I just enjoyed reading it so much... I really would like to translate it to Spanish for to allow to the spanish readers who don't know English to read it... Because I think they should do it. Because I think your story is wonderful.

See you!

Sequel please with bilbo no frodo

Very well written.

Good start. :) Waiting for the next installment.

I don't understand why Bilbo would not know they were dead.

Loooved it

Non vraiment, il est super. J'en suis qu'à la première partie premier film de Bilbo, mais bon, je me doute bien qu'il est revenu d'Erebor MDR
J'aime beaucoup la phrase finale, tellement juste... tellement appropriée. Et niveau anglais, pour ce que ça peut valoir de ma part, je trouve que tu as progressé C'est très fluide et agréable, et surtout, on a la sensation d'un texte en anglais avec les tournures anglaises.

Merci !

Wow that was... hopeful yet really depressing. I like how you used the riddle to do it.