Reviews for Give Your Heart A Break |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Woah I didn't see a thank you coming, but I appreciate it |
![]() ![]() ![]() Sweeney, did you really think getting her to chop the meat while sick was a good idea? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ai, I wonder if Sweeney will get back after the doctor's gone and if he'll take care of her |
![]() ![]() ![]() I feel so sad for Nellie, being sick is awfull enough without Mr T being so cold. I wonder how this unfolds |
![]() ![]() ![]() Somehow the picture of Sweeney carrying Nellie with an unchanged expression is hilarious to me. Can't wait to see where this goes |
![]() ![]() Really good! Please keep writing, maybe mr. Todd finally falls for mrs. Lovett. Please keep doing these, they're really good |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aww *fangirls a little* this was a cute chapter (excluding the fact that they had to grind and bake Turpin but still cute ;) ) can't wait for the next chapter |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it so far. Please continue! Your writing is wonderful. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Glad the judge is safely tucked away in a pie! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm sooo happy you kept the focus on Sweeney and Mrs. Lovett! Even though killing Turpin is the main focus of the original story, you didn't let that overrule yours :D Kudos! Please don't give up! This is seriously one of the best Toddett's I've read; I REALLY want to see how it progresses! D: But don't rush!...keep it at the steady pace you have mastered (: LOVE this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was funny! Is he so helpless that he can't clean up and take care of one mess? |
![]() ![]() ![]() You gotta continue this :)) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Keep. Writing. Pleeeeease! I love this story and I really hope you continue. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Awww, this is so good. I love this story, it kinda reminds me of a role play I've been doing with my friend hehe. Poor Nellie, come on Sweeney, open your heart a little help her, come on XDDDD so good though, very well written. I've posted two fanfics of Sweeney and Mrs. Lovett on here too but its in the musical category, I didn't know there were too categories for Sweeney but anyways, if you got time you could check them out hehe. I look forward to reading more of this as well, good job. Have a good day! :) |
![]() ![]() LOVE this story, keep going! :D |