Holy freaking mother of maple... I have never read a reader insert this intense.

Well I'm certainly still here
I'm glad you did not wait any longer because, even if you believe the chapter is not perfect, it seems to me that your writing style is getting more and more natural. I like the way it flows, especially in the second part, so maybe less editing is actually helping the story :)
The Nordics interact so well, you can tell that there's something strange in the air while they still act in character around each other.
And, as always, can't wait to see how this goes on because even though I know you left clues here and there and I have my own theories, I still can't figure out the whole picture.

What the garbage is this? I don't get the entire concept, therefore it's shite.

Bad story, moving on.

saklghfdsjnklguhadip!
This chapter is filled with such suspense!
Beautifully written & has captured me completely!
I must admit, I laughed out loud when I read the "Norway doesn't share anything" line! Hahaha!
I'm beginning to absolutely adore this tale!
Cant wait to find out what happens next!

Oh my! This is exciting! :D
You capture the unnerving atmosphere very well!
Can't wait to read more of this!

I love the story. It is kinda funny, how the nordic 5 are ''bad" people, yet I still love them. 3 But I still want them back to normal. Norway most of all.. It almost breaks my heart to see him as a bad guy, and I am just here praying he will regain his normal self soon... To make it worse, it makes me feel like a bad guy to, since I am of Norwegian blood. Yup. I am a Norwegian.

Ah so this is what they were doing. I think I'm giving up guessing what happens next. And you're right, this was fun. Evil can be so much fun sometimes... or most of the times

oh crap, they're coming for me now. can't wait for the next chapter

Very interesting! :)

Don't worry, the chapter was perfectly understandable (the little list at the end helped too ) Now I'm curious how the other draft looked like, same storyline differently written I suppose?
And I sort of suspected Romania, since he's the only magic user we know of who's so conspicuously absent.

I smell a conspiracy with Russia and the absent party, but how did the building catch fire? Was it the apart of the Nordics plan? BTW This plot, I love how thought out it is!

Yup, Spain is totally going to freak. Can't wait to see that. . Anyway, it's sorta funny how I came upon your story, I thought it was one with your OC, but I figured out it was a "reader in the story" story, so I just insert a random name. I really love this story, I think it's the 2ps!

So the plot thickens. I really, really wonder who could hate those nations so much. Burning house, ouch. On the other hand, if the house burns down then they should be more or less free to go right?

Your America is fun to read as well, I couldn't help smirk when those letters popped out (probably written in some fancy calligraphy too I'd bet) and Alfred just dismissed poor England's effort as being old fashioned Typical.

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THIS STORY IS AWESOME

I love this story! It's unique and mindbending. You've portrayed the characters very well and your English is good. I love how you brought the rest of the nations into the story. It's too bad they trapped in a room. Please update soon. Pretty please? :)

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