Reviews for This Would Be Paradise
Guest chapter 16 . 2/7
please continue
Ronnie Jane chapter 16 . 3/11/2018
Great story ! Please update soon!
Morbidmuch chapter 16 . 7/2/2017
It's a shame you haven't updated in over four years, because this is really good!
Astrid Brown chapter 15 . 12/30/2016
I can only say I love this work!Good luck at school,though.I love how E/E develops slowly,unlike many fics out ,I like how you write of many other details,like the thoughts of the characters,anyway,update please!
Astrid Brown chapter 16 . 12/29/2016
Wow!I like this really special,unlike others I've seen before,you actually let the revolution succeed,and you're daring enough to kill off update!I'm dying for a new chapter!
Guest chapter 1 . 5/8/2015
I miss this story!
Deep Forest Green chapter 16 . 12/27/2013
I like the blossoming Cosette/Feyrac (if you choose to go that way!) I think I am slowly being converted to that ship. Anyway, this is one of the better E/E fics I have read and I really hope that you will continue to update it ASAP. Kudos!
Deep Forest Green chapter 15 . 12/27/2013
I like how you named the nun Marianne :)
Deep Forest Green chapter 14 . 12/27/2013
Love the philosophical bonding between the Amis here. Hope they will see more action!
Deep Forest Green chapter 13 . 12/27/2013
I like how both Cosette and Éponine are getting a sense of purpose from the revolution. Part of me is hoping that Enjolras will go down to Versailles just because he is cool that way!
Deep Forest Green chapter 12 . 12/27/2013
I like how Cosette is so concerned for Enjolras. And you captured her religiosity well. I'm really glad you didn't go the Cosette/Parnasse route (whispers) eew!
Deep Forest Green chapter 11 . 12/27/2013
I like that the bastard (I mean National Guardsman) who killed Enjolras is dead! And I love Valjean and Éponine bonding over their fake identities and over Cosette. And yay, the revolution is succeeding!
Deep Forest Green chapter 10 . 12/27/2013
I love Cosette and Éponine's interaction here, and how Cosette is showing her brave and compassionate side. They make a great team! And there will finally be some Enjonine in the next chapter!
Deep Forest Green chapter 9 . 12/27/2013
OMG, cliffhanger! I like the twist with the criminals helping the students. And I love how Enjolras is reflecting on how he would rather die than kill but is willing to do both for his cause. It sort of reminds me of Huck Finn, when Huck says that he is willing to go to hell to help Jim escape :) Keep writing!
Deep Forest Green chapter 8 . 12/27/2013
I love Valjean and Enjolras' conversation about Marius. And I love that Valjean called himself 'LeBlanc', giving himself the same nickname that Marius did ;) Don't worry, I don't think it was OOC for him to die for Enjolras. If you are going by the book, then he would've wanted to die and thought he might as well die for a good cause. And if you're going by the musical, he would've believed in the cause as well.
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