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I just about died with Iruka's "just let me have one romantic moment." Lost my restraint and cackled like a hen. Too perfect a line, too perfect a couple, just really frickin' hilarious all around. I feel bad for Kakashi having been spur of the moment proposed to like that, but I'm glad they made up. Gah, I just keep imagining Tsunade's reaction, and how she would insist on being the officiator and dressing them up and then getting rip-roaring drunk. Fun times. Thank you for the ficlet. KTN

So cute! Awesome job!

hahaha love it

Amazing. I adore everything you've done with their characters, they sound like themselves, they act like actual men, I literally couldn't ask for more! And dog tags instead of rings, dude! Pure brilliance! I love everything about it, you should be proud of yourself, it's stunning! Thanks for writing it!

hahahaha love it

Haha! I didn't think Kakashi would actually go through with it (ie payback Iruka for his knee to the groin). Gotta love their banter! :) what is "Shi" stand for? "Shinobi"?...

omg. So cute.
"Can't you let me have my one romantic moment?"
XXDDDDD
That dog tag exchange. so practical-ish and so ninja-like.
Love.
Thank you for writing!

You write these two so well.

lol this was really cute and hilarious at the same time. I love the way you write kakashi, he's so weird but freaking adorable.

Lol, nice!

awwwwww, that's so cute! loved this story, sooo sweet

Well you've piqued my interest so I decided to see what your writing had to offer. I would have read your newest story, but since there was some steamy malexmale at the beginning and that's not my cup of tea, I decided on this one.

Your writing is definitely interesting. It's very easy to fall into and I read quite a few paragraphs before starting this review, something that rarely ever happens.

The slut at the beginning made me laugh. She was way over the top, especially with placing Iruka's hand on her chest. I think you did that on purpose though and it's a good thing you did because it made me as the reader say, "Stop being such a whore, he doesn't want you".

Iruka's response to her when she blatantly said she was hitting on him was a bit nonchalant for his personality I do think, but he dropped back into his personality as the story progresses.

How dense can this female be? Wow you're doing a great job of making me want to strangle her with how self obsessed she is. Then again, it's very easy to make me want to strangle someone...non violently of course.

Stop doing this to me! I Keep reading and forgetting I'm supposed to be critiquing. This is very good my love. Kudos to you.

The way you had Iruka calling him "Shi" without revealing his gender was very clever. I'm over here shouting, "It's Kakashi!" so I'm sure you caused your other readers to do the same thing.

I think Kakashi disappearing when Iruka proposed was very in character of him. I was thinking that maybe you would have him go out of character with his response, but you didn't. The fact that he didn't care knew he was in a relationship with a male seemed very like him as well. I'm guessing Genma knew it though ).

I will say I was very happy when that stupid bitch got put in her place. You have done an amazing job at making the reader resent this Jounin. How you got away without ever mentioning her name was very impressive as well.

I felt like when Kakashi and Iruka finally met up again and Kakashi is asking about there being a bet on if he says yes or no, that he was hurting a bit. Maybe I'm reading to deep into it, but that's the message I got. Because he was misunderstanding, he started blaming Iruka for things that weren't actually true.

Very good job. It's not often I have pretty much nothing negative to say. You're doing a great job and if you start writing hetero pairings, let me know because I will most likely read them.

That is all.

ღYour Mistressღ

Reveina

That was absolutely adorable. I love it!