Oh no! I thought for sure Kili was dead. But it’ll all work out right? Really good. Love the suspense.

Yeah! Now they all know all the brothers are alive. I can’t wait to see this go down. You’re battle scenes are amazing!

Oh snap! Dis showed up! I’m glad she’s going to redeem herself after what she said about Kili! Good work. Loved the brother scenes!

The suspense... Whatever Fili choses, I hope Thorin can save them. Keep writing! You’re amazing!

Oh my goodness! You made this story up as you went? That’s amazing! It’s so well written. The torture scene with Kili... man. That was intense. I hope Thorin catches up with him soon!

Oh man! Nice job describing Kili’s fight with the orcs. The pain actually being his stitches bursting was a nice touch. And Fili! He finally knows his brother’s alive... for now. Great work! I love this story!

I liked the Thorin interlude, especially when he thinks about how the brothers positive attitudes have affected him and how proud he is. I worry about Kili though. How is going to get past all the orcs? Keep writing! You are amazing. (I know you’ve already finished this story, but you are so good at writing, I want to encourage you to keep writing stories and writing the brothers!)

No Fili! Don’t die! You’re brother’s coming! The drama in this story is driving me crazy and pulling me in at the same time. I can’t wait to see how this ends, and I really hope the two will be reunited soon! Keep writing stories!

No Kili! But then, maybe he’ll actually find out Fili is alive? I hope so. You’ve got me on the edge of my seat and I can’t wait to read more!

That flashback... wow. The action was amazing. You captured the chaos and the rage of the battle of the orcs. I couldn’t wait to see what had happened for the brothers to be in such a terrible position and you did not disappoint. I love your writing style, and you really bring the characters to life. Never stop writing! You are amazing!

Oh man! Thorin! That scene where he uses tough love to snap Kili out of it, and he even cries... I feel so much for this family. I hope they get back together soon!

This story! I can’t get over it! Every chapter is heart jerking and beautifully written! I can’t wait to keep reading! You’re amazing!

The Fili scenes! You are so amazing, I almost cried. The relationship between these two brothers is one of my absolute favorites. Their struggle is so real and you just bring it to life. Keep writing! You have a real gift!

Whoa. That’s intense. Well written, but wow. You’re an amazing writer.

Just discovered this gem. Truly powerful! Kudos!