Reviews for Yami no Ai
guest chapter 1 . 8/18
great chapter would love to see more
willam and jack and jake chapter 13 . 8/20
very well done
Mhdrkbalm chapter 13 . 8/1
harems shouldnt be ilegal in naruto considering how many wars have happened and them living in the feudal system where having good genetics can massively increase the strength of each village. if it was it would only start evening frowned upon as naruto generation where their has been about 16 years of peace. even so the leaf need more strong shinobi AAfter the ninectails attack and the Uchiha massacre.. I male strong male would be worth a lot more as chakra comoacity and
GunBlade2020 chapter 13 . 7/27
Hi there

All the hard work, and now the fathers ruined it...

Anyway, keep up the great writing and stay safe!
Bubblezmith chapter 13 . 7/27
Damn good chapter. Keep it up. 8D
Inzaneamaru chapter 13 . 7/26
And the plot thickens! Shame there weren't more Inoichi scenes in canon though, and now Im reminded he died in the war... Anyways great update as always although short, we want more!
windwolf777 chapter 13 . 7/25
Huh, I find it interesting that Hiashi is the more accepting one, Inoichi is the prude, and that Sakura is actually telling her dad about Inner Sakura. Interesting to see how she describes it and what comes of it
oghren chapter 13 . 7/25
Interesting chapter, I'm particularly surprised with how Hiashi and Inoichi acted, I mean usually I've read where Hiashi hates on Naruto but this version seems to have reasoned it out quite well. However with Inoichi I never would have seen the blond hair being an issue, but looking back they are the only people in Konoha that are blonde (except the fourth but he was an orphan, which would be funny if Ink connected the dots that he is Naruto's father simply off hair color). So I'm looking forward to how that will further play out. I'm also kinda expecting when Sakura talks about her inner self that she is deadly serious and her father just simply answers that she gets it from her mother and doesn't say anything else. I mean it would be the perfect joke in the way. All in all great job and keep it up.
bloodbrother 18 chapter 13 . 7/25
Interesting cant wait for more post soon.
Jostanos chapter 13 . 7/25
Omake?: "Dad.. I don't know how to tell you this.. so I'll get to the point. *sighs* I have a "Dark Side"."

(There a literally thousands of ways that that may be continued, however I am leaving it entirely up to you guys! Good luck!)
redHussar chapter 13 . 7/25
As cold as it is to say, Inochi is almost completely right. Firstly, about virginity - considering that hymen can be lost during exercises, especially among kunoichis, it's the experience of sex that should be considered the mark of losing virginity. Another matter is whether keeping it is important or not, but Inoichi's definition is simply logical.

Secondly, as heartless as it is to distance his clan from Uzumaki, this is the pragmatic choice. Inoichi is a clan head, not a Santa Claus or Mother Theresa. His first priority is to protect his people.

Of course, let me make one thing clear- I liked, your chapter, I'm only laughing at Ino's youthful naivete. That her and her father's words and action can force me to argue, makes your fanfic all the better.
UnsanMusho chapter 13 . 7/25
Hmm... as much as I want to bash Ino's dad I have to give him props for being a good clan leader and I wonder what Ino will do now?
VA23 chapter 13 . 7/24
Ooh yes. Even if this takes awhile, a new chapter is always appreciated. And this one was a joy to read.
VFSNAKE chapter 13 . 7/24
That was a good chapter. Inoichi is being an ass. Ino should punch him right in the nuts. Punch him there damn it! Hinata has the green light to see Naruto. YAY!
R-king 93 chapter 13 . 7/24
Awesome chapter
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