I'm dying in cuteness overload here !

I died of cute.

That was so darn cute! Makes me all warm and fuzzy. :-)

Yep, that's just the way it would probably happen, with both of them slowly getting used to more and more physical contact, until suddenly one day... sexytime!

You have such a talent as a writer, I especially love these little Caryl oneshots...excellent!

**"You didn't have to, you know."

A glance across her face found her smiling that small, knowing smile at him again, and suddenly, his stomach settled and his muscles relaxed.

His mouth lifted and he didn't fight it, just as he knew he wouldn't fight her if and when she decided to lean in for that next kiss.

"Yeah…I know."

But I wanted to.**

Aaaah! FEELINGS. Love this so hard!

Cute. Normally I love your stories, but this one, not quite up to normal standards. The kisses just didn't seem to fit. They didn't seem to work and flow. They were completely random. I mean, Daryl comes back from a hunt and Carol just randomly kisses? and again, he's on watch, dozing, and she randomly kisses? they're just a bit random.

:D Sweet sugary Daryl goodness :)
Crystal

This was so wonderfully sugary and sweet and absolutely perfect. Daryl's such a little softie on the inside - emotional and uneasy with a rough and rugged exterior. Sort like a nougat bar. ... or something equally delicious. Great little one-shot!

nice

Way cute...great job on this one. I really liked it!

I am wrapped in saccarine here. This was wonderful! Loved it, loved it, loved it! Your writing is like a oreo cookies - read one and I crave more and more.

Loved this! I think you are spot on with your characterization of both Carol and Daryl. He is so sweet with her and you portrayed that perfectly.

Awwwwwsomuch feeeels it's awesome :)

-Sass E.

so so good!.. don't stop please.. i hate these one shot story.. they always leave me wanting more!