Great story so far. I chose Slytherin for Harry... :D

I think you shouldn't worry to much on making the right choice in the house. you will find the right choice, also your first chapters are pretty good and i like the idea of sirrius raising harry.

Hello nice Chapter I will vote in your poll i was wondering if Harry will be with ginny sincerely Alex Lilly Potter

Harry should be in Gryffindor of course! I can't imagine him placed into Slytherin, that would just be weird. By the way, i love your story so far!

This story has a very interesting set up, and I absolutely adore the plot. I was hoping to hear not only about how Harry had changed, but Sirius as well, and I think you managed to do that exceptionally well. A lot of maturity and patience is required with raising children, and I'm glad you adopted that to his personality. I also enjoy that you were able to maintain a flair of his joking and sarcastic personality, if only just a little. I do wish I had been able to see how much 12 Grimmauld Place had changed as well. Oh well, I will use my imagination. Keep up the good work, and I will continue to read!

I really like this story, You make the conversations funny and realistic and the characters are very believable (although I did have to get used to Sirius as a Head of House and I think Harry's acting a tad too young). Your writing style's very nice and I'm looking forward to when you're (finally) going to update. You do know the last chapter was posted 3 months ago? O.o
I'd like to be a beta. But I'm not exactly sure what a Beta has to do... Check for grammar mistakes and make sure the plot's believable? I think I'd manage that :)

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please contuie

Really good first fanfic

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I like it

Nice start to your story and thanks for sharing!

This is good, but you need to work on your descriptions. You give too much detail at times (eg. Getting ready) and not enough at others. But this is good and i cant wait to see where you go with it.

I'm really intrigued by this story. I'm sure many HP fans have wondered how Harry would have turned out if he had been raised by someone other than the Dursleys.

I like the way you write, and I love the story idea. I think that sometimes you tell us too much, though. I think most writers do it, as we want to give so much to our audience. For example, when Harry is getting dressed we don't need to know that he pulls his socks and shoes out of the closet. Instead you could say he takes his polo and his trousers, and then describe him hopping around the room with his shoes and socks (I found this a good descrption). Also, when leaving/entering rooms, you don't need to tell us that a certain door of a certain room is closing etc. It interrupts the flow of the story.

Just my opinion, of course. Well done so far, I'm now following this story :D

- Tiff