I love this so much! *crying*

wow that was really hot and sexy...and totally funny in the end. I can totally picture this in the movie. Im a fan of this pairring. Great job you did with this one :)

I love Bagginshield. n_n

That was... a little cheesy at the end, but not so bad in the whole ;D
Thanks !

***Pyrane***

aaaaaw I likes it soooooo much-ess

Correct, only Thorin could be so commanding whilst still inside Bilbo! LOL

love it ! it was great ! I hope you write even more stories like this ;)

i just love how you ended that! i like how they walked in on them to... that was funny, i started laughing so hard!

I really liked this one. I enjoyed the bit of humor as well, with Kili. It was nice to read a story where the lovers were just accepted by the rest of the group.

cute and funny

I almost died laughing at the end. Even naked and buried to the hilt in a hobbit, he still commanding and majestic.

That was... pretty damn good! The best part was the detail that was put into the relationship of the characters. Nothing went too fast or too slow. I also enjoyed how Thorin too had feelings for Bilbo. Usually stories are about characters not knowing about their feelings and they have to discover them, so I'm glad i didn't take that path. Their were spelling errors but nothing major at all. Just natural everyday, annoying grammatical mistakes lol. Also the wide range of vocabulary used was refreshing! The right words were used to express the emotions, humor, & chemistry well. Very impressed.

Yeah...I am pretty much in love with this pairing. Good story.

Oh my god, how I loved ending of this. :_D I'm still laughing and oh, how I love Thilbo. Thank you for writing this. (':

That was great! Love the part when the other dwarves busted in on them.