| Reviews for A Crime Fitting the Punishment or Dumbledore's Monster |
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ionsjun chapter 1 . 6/13 EXCELLENT |
Nylnej chapter 1 . 6/12 This is so compelling, even after a second read through. Excellent story. |
Je'daii1298 chapter 1 . 6/12 Yet another fic that sings Hermione’s praises and curses Ron. People tend to forget that Ron was under the influence of the horcrux when he left Harry in the forest. He went on to save Harry’s life and helped destroy two horcruxes. You could have made Ron more positive but it would seem you’re too petty for that. Everyone talks about how lazy Ron was when Harry also coasted off Hermione and didn’t even bother learning more advanced spells except the Patronus even after knowing that the fate of the world was on his shoulders. |
Guest chapter 1 . 5/1 Of course it's a happy story - the Harry who returned to the past accomplished his goals and then no longer had to endure life without his loved ones, and he did it in such a way that the current younger Harry wouldn't have to. |
stevem1 chapter 1 . 4/2 This is a short and brilliant time travel fic. Highly recommended. |
TrenchcoatMan chapter 1 . 3/30 It really was a pretty good story. I can't say it's a good ending, but I can see the potential for a happy ending. Lots of people died, but in the end, Old Harry has probably given Young Harry the potential to lead a very happy life. There certainly won't be a war. No one's going to die because of Horcrux Hunting, though I suspect Riddle will still make some attempt at a final battle. I have to wonder who Harry will end up with though. At this point either Ginny or Hermione are both perfectly viable options. Harry x Hermione is such a popular pairing after all. I actually liked the pairings at the end of the books, even if Ron x Hermione seems to be quite unpopular, even by Rowling herself. -TCM |
setokayba2n chapter 1 . 3/30 Good story but maybe adult Harry should had left a message for the younger Harry and Hermione to make sure nothing happen and Hermione is not tied to Ron Weasley again |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/27 Harry's logic is kind of right yet so fundamentally skewed at the same time. |
The Punmaster chapter 1 . 3/27 This was... disturbing. |
tcl7189 chapter 1 . 3/25 Wow... |
Lindela chapter 1 . 2/25 Loved it! |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/18 good, but why invite ginny at that point those two have nothing with each other? Do hope with that change it becomes h/hr. |
James Burdsong chapter 1 . 2/16 Wonderful |
MissLuxe chapter 1 . 1/28 Oh wow this was incredible |
AvidReader2425 chapter 1 . 12/19/2019 Damn onions |