Oh, I really wish you would continue! This is brilliant!

Please update!

I hope you update soon! I want to know what's going on! This story is great and really well written!

Running out of review ideas hmm. . . . . . . .

Awesomeness but I think that wolf shouldn't be so depressed

He he I'm full of ideas but I can never seem to put them into story format

Wow this is really good I. I wish I owned doctor who if I did I would bring rose back and make 13 in his 20 s I would alsom make rose have bad wolf powers so when the doctor died for the last time she could bring him back again and that way he would ave 13 more regenerations. If I owned doctor who a lot of people would stop watching it because I would get rid of a lot of things like river song and I would also make make sure that rose was a time lord so she could regenerate two. Also I would do some super complex timey wimy thing that would make the doctor have never lost rose in the first place so he would no t of married river song and river would of never became river and would of just stayed as melody pond and Amy and rory still traveled with him.

Copyright laws protect this no one may steal my idea because I may use that actually. (-: we'll Mabye you can use it but u have to have my permission first and it also depended on how good of an author u are and I also have another idea someone can use so pm me if u want it. I must beta the

This story is really good please keep updating it and don't stop writing it. If I become rich I will buy the rights to doctor who but u won't change anything well ... When I say that I mean I won't change much I promise ;) ;) ;).

Please keep on writing this story.

It's really good. I wanna know who that little girl is and we're she fits in please update soon.

Please please please please please please please.

Star

OH MY GOD PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE UPDATE SOON! who is the girl!?

Oooo, I can't wait for more!

She better read it. I wonder who that little girl is. Also. when does the Doctor come in?

Awwww... I liked Wilfred.

:)

What?

I'm not exactly sure, but signs point to her being Romanadvoratrelundar/Romana/Fred. The scarf, jacket, and her saying she was deposed.

I was confused like everyone else, but with some rereading, it seems that the unnamed male character is the Master, and therefore this occurs within the Time Lock and the mentioned 'they' in the first part are other Time Lords, but I'm still clueless as to whom the unnamed female character is. This is probably what you intended and you pulled it off pretty well. I'll be watching this story for updates.