shepardowhy is everything written in dictation?"
and why isn't implied that ratchet is in charge. Arcee is second in command and with prime out of the picture she would be the one calling the shots. I'm not sure if the author is just too inexperienced at writing or if they just shouldn't write at all

super poor writing

please update this book so that i can see if optimus is rescued and how they defeat the decepticons and mech.

please update this story soon coz i want to know what happens to optimus and what happens next, hope you update soon.

Sam: So, for my family genealogy report, I decided to do it on my great-great-grandfather, who was a famous man, Captain Archibald Witwicky. Very famous explorer. In fact, he was one of the first... to explore... the Arctic Circle, which is a big deal. In 1897, he took forty one brave sailors straight into the Arctic Shelf.
Archibald: Move faster, men! Move! Chop! Heave!
Sailor: The ice is freezing faster than it's melting!
Archibald: Chop faster!
Sailor: Got to chop faster or we'll be stuck!
Archibald: Heave, men! Heave! No sacrifice, no victory! We'll get to the Arctic Circle, lads!

Optimus Prime: Our planet was once a powerful empire. Peaceful and just. Until we were betrayed by Megatron, leader of the Decepticons. All who defied them were destroyed. Our war finally consumed the planet, and the All Spark was lost to the stars.
Hologram Megatron: (growl)
Optimus Prime: Megatron followed it to Earth, where Captain Witwicky found him.
Hologram Megatron: (growl)
Sam: Oh. My grandfather.
Optimus Prime: It was an accident that intertwined our fates.
Sailor: Come back!
Sailor: I think the dogs have found something.
Archibald: The ice is cracking!
Sailor: Captain!
Sailor: Captain! Grab my rope, Captain!
Sailor: Captain!
Archibald: I'm all right, lads!
Sailor: Can we throw you a rope, captain?
Optimus Prime: Megatron crash-landed before he could retrieve the Cube.
Archibald: Men! We've made a discovery!
Sailor: (indistinct yelling)
Optimus Prime: He accidentally activated his navigation system.
Megatron: (speaks in Cybertronian)
Archibald: Aaaaaah!
Optimus Prime:The coordinates to the Cube's location on Earth were imprinted on his glasses.
Sam: How'd you know about his glasses?
Optimus Prime: eBay.
Sam: eBay.
Ratchet: If the Decepticons find the All Spark, they will use its power to transform Earth's machines and build a new army.
Optimus Prime: And the human race will be extinguished. Sam Witwicky, you hold the key to Earth's survival.
Mikaela: Please tell me that you have those glasses.

please update this story its getting good and i am looking forward to seeing if they find and rescue optimus prime

please continue writting this story coz its really good i would like to see how this story ends and how things progress between jack and arcee.

Wooooow, kinda went a bit overboard didn’t ya?

Noticed the reference, too bad they couldn’t join the team

Please update soon as I’m enjoying this book and I wanna see how jack and Arcee’s relationship develops.

Read through the whole series in one go and I gotta say, nice work. Overall plot was pretty solid and consistent, the characters were believable, and you didn't instantly go super-sappy on the Jack/Arcee romance. The pre-and-post chapter emails/letters are a great touch and manage to add some background details without interrupting the flow of the chapter.

The only critiques I can offer are grammatical and a few word issues, for instance you use Torrent in place of Turret. You also sometimes (And I do this myself so I know what it's like) use words that sound the same as what you're trying to say, but aren't always the right word for what it is you're trying to say. You may wish to check the definitions of things as you write.

Overall great story and I'm gonna go see if you have the next one up :)

are going to ad ultra magnus

please update soon coz i love this story and i cant wait for the next chapters and how this book will progress as well.

Nice to see those two finally kiss.

Great introduction to Mech's new army. Bumblebee's new coloring was fine.