That was very interesting to read! Thank you, I loved it)

I LOVE YOU! THIS IS GREAT!

*grin* It's no fun if you don't have anyone to play with, glad Kili found a playmate! I love the development of questions and how they grew more and more personal throughout the whole piece. Nicely done!

(Ok I'm a Frenchwoman so I apologize my grammar, my spelling ...)
Hello ! I have laughed during all of your story, it was so funny ! I love Kili and his questions (sometimes stranges questions). It is a very good fanfiction so congratulations !
A Frenchwoman reader

kudos. I like the implications at the end.

That's...so cute O.O Like, the question-asking. The harp-playing in Erebor. Gosh, Kili is like an inquisitive, wide-eyed child...which he is, in certain ways.

I really like how some things are said. Like the dialogue. And stuff like...his "'bothering to think' face." xD Everything's just really nicely worded. Witty, to boot. With good imagery.

Very nicely constructed and nicely written.

PT

P.S. Yum-yum, those innuendos at the end...;)

I love it! Wish there was more though...

So gutted this is only a one-shot! Do you plan on writing more? I really love your characterisations of both Thorin and Kili. This really made me smile, thank you!

Aww that was adorable.

I love this! It's so sweet. Your characterization is great! I hop you write more of them(:

Cute story! I love curious Kili, and the ending! I can only imagine what happened. ;)