The end xD

Freaking lost it at the "gramps" part! So funny!

You should do one shots for later in their lives. Just an idea.

OHMYGOSH THAT WAS ADORABLE! Excellent job. I love the way you included songs in the story. You'll Be In My Heart was definitely my favorite. This was an AMAZING story, and I hope you'll continue writing in general. Keep up the good work! :)

nice , another story where Jack is Sophie and Jamie's great something uncle

i figured out what he was singing after the 2nd line ,

lol at what Pitch did to Jack

i've noticed that Pitch tends to fall into the role of being a grandfather in several stories

i can kinda see Jamie and Sophie growing up at the pole and becoming helpers , Sophie would be Bunny's and Jamie could be Sandy , thet'd need to be apointed by Many so they could stay longer then a few decades

oh that was a stroke of luck in their decision

I wish human dentists didn't have to use tools. I don't have a problem with the people in my dentist's office, but I don't like have having someone poking around in my mouth. Although, I've always been fascinated by the little mirrors...

You need to write come more chapters. I really want to find out what happens as they grow up with the guardians.

It was a great story love it :)

aaaaw...this is so sweet! I freaking love this story. I can't wait to see what happens next!

d'awww is there a sequel? this deserves a sequel. with Jamie being a teen and being typical- and also him being bigger then Jack and using it against him

I awwed..