Reviews for Naruto: What If
silentkitsune chapter 73 . 4h
sorry for the guest review, FF wont let me log in, but i digress, this has been a helva ride, its been a long time since i binge read a story of this length in a few days, the humor in it is great, and it will definitely go into my list of story's worth a re read. kinda annoyed with that last cliff hanger, but it just means i want to see what happens next, keep up the good work, hope to see a new chapter soon. now im off to check out your other stories!
Valaista chapter 28 . 7/22
This was a really weird chapter Kisame wouldn't be this easy to beat.
Come on he is very famous for being stronger then many Kage level ninjas. I'm sure he deserves more.
Plus his sword betrayed him... That has to be a trick, because it actually was a trick in the anime. Samehada is sentient and was actually loyal to Kisame and mourned his death in the anime.
Lets see where you'll take us author
Valaista chapter 26 . 7/22
Wow. That was hot.
Some more descriptive loving would have been great though.
Though i don't understand Anko right now. Probably because I'm a guy and don't think too deeply in to the morality as long as consent is there.
Keep up the great work
Valaista chapter 22 . 7/22
Awesome chapter as always Mr/Miss Blade.
Sasuke's behavior never stops being amusing... Except those interactions with Jiriaya and Hinata's dad, those look sorta over done and excessive.
On the other hand I really can't wait for some succulent lemons between Anko and Sasuke. It's like you've been teasing about it for the entire story now.
And as always keep up the awesome work
acherus01 chapter 2 . 7/22
Really? The SI is a 17 year old, heavily calloused, kid covered in scars with bulging muscles? Really?

It really doesn't get much more chuuni than this. And the "humor" is juvenile and cringey as fuck.

Don't expect much when/if you start reading.
Valaista chapter 8 . 7/21
Spectacular ()b
Your handling of dark comedy such as Sasuke hacking Gato to death then saying "Well, I feel much better now, how 'bout y'all?" Almost brought me to tears.
And your handling of Zabuza was soo well thought out that glued me to the story for the first time in a very Very long time.
Truly keep up the amazing work
Valaista chapter 1 . 7/21
Awesome concept.
I'm shocked you started this story 8 years ago.
Keep up the amazing work
Valor-Derzod chapter 2 . 7/12
Oh wow the humor in this story is terrible, ungodly so.
HeavensHellRazor chapter 72 . 7/9
In the words of an immortal on the silver screen: most excellent!
MangekyouSharingan1234 chapter 71 . 7/8
I love this story, but shouldn't the character ya know, feel sad that he won't be able to see anything he left behind.
MangekyouSharingan1234 chapter 72 . 7/8
I just wanted to say. Please don't take this the wrong way. This is to fill your romantic fantasies about Anko isn't it? I understand. :)
shugokage chapter 72 . 7/7
Great job on this chapter!
Abdur Rauf Aymaan chapter 72 . 7/6
are you paid at all?
shugokage chapter 71 . 7/5
Great job on this interesting story and chapter!
dude2865 chapter 23 . 7/5
Fuck itachi has me dead rn
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