Intriguing!

FINISH IT.

valar is more of an elvish word, just sayin

FINISH IT.

This is a good story but its such a shame its not finished. It would have been nice to at least find out what hapend to Thorin.

Great chapter.

That's so great, I really love your story. I'm waiting for the next udapte now

Glad to see you are writing your story again. I think you do a great job of developing a friendship between Thorin and Bilbo. I am almost afraid to start reading it again, since it seems like a year since the last update. I fear I will die of old age before you finish it. But, in many ways it is worth waiting for and I hope you finish it in a timely manner. I don't want to chastise you too much for fear you will not continue to write. So go for it, you got me hooked again.

Why do I get the feeling Noeg isn't planning to come back?

Update. Soon. Please... Must. Know. What. Happens. Next... Love. Story.

God bless :)

Great chapter!

hey,
i like your story very much. it's so cool, that you put the petty-dwarves in ;-). they are so mysterious, because they dont fit to the 7 houses.

i really wonder, if they make it to the company in time. but they have to!

i think, it will become very difficult for bilbo to kepp thorin awake. but my mind says, that bilbo is going to fail on that, and maybe thorins breathing stops.

hope, that the new chap won't take long.
maybe at christmas? PLEASE!

TheDwarfess

Most gripping. I look forward to reading the rest when it isn't five AM.

WOW! I am in love! Please continue! I know this hasn't been updated for like a year, but I love this!

hello ! I just end reading the 21 chapters ! It was just amazing, but please, udapte this, you have to do a next... It can't ends like it T-T