I enjoyed this story, hope your muse comes back to this one day... :(

I just noticed that I had actually already reviewed this story and posted some criticism, so doing so all over again was a mistake on my part. Feel free to ignore it.

Look, I'm going to be brutally honest here, no offense intended, but this needs to be said. If you don't want Ranma to lolstomp anything weaker than a captain or another vasto lorde, you really should not have made her into one, much less an arrancar.

By all rights, that adjuchas should have been no threat whatsoever, duplication be damned. Likewise there is no way Uruhara could ever knock out a vasto lorde-class arrancar with a single attack unless they were already exhausted and ready to drop. And no, fighting against an adjuchas isn't even remotely enough to exhaust even the weakest of vasto lorde.

*takes a deep breath*

And I think I'll stop here. Feel free to ignore my criticism if you want, I've said my piece and I hope it's useful to you in some way. If not, well, at least I tried.

Well the story was getting interesting I definitly hope its not the end

You gonna continue? It was rather interesting.

I look forward to seeing your rewriten version of this one. In my opinion, it was done very well with only minor errors here and there.

Best of luck!

Wait, what? Ranma was Vasto Lorde-class when she became Arrancar? That makes no sense, those are described as being equal or superior to Shinigami captains, and becoming an Arrancar makes them even stronger... There's no way an adjuchas would be able to even scratch her, and no way that Uruhara could just knock her out with a single kido.

This isn't me having a "god Ranma" complex, this is me pointing out that Vasto Lorde-class Arrancar are ludicrously powerful, each of them capable of going toe-to-toe with a Captain using bankai. If Ranma is a Vasto Lorde arrancar, then the fight in the chapter prior to this one should have been much simpler, and Uruhara would have had to try a lot harder to even budge her.

I honestly thought she was an adjuchas class at most, or even just an unusually powerful non-Menos Grande class...

AWESOME! Update soon!

CH 284 says each Gillian is made from 100's of hollows and adjuchas are from gillians eating others for a short time... so if each was only 100 strong then maybe 1000-10000 per adjuchas. And each adjuchas has to eat others until their power peaks, no specific number, but using pattern we can discern 100h-g 100g-a 100a-v so a million hollow souls max but that's on a 100100100 scale min is10k

Interesting Story, byes

ok, I'd like to say, that grimmjow vs ulquiorr is osto lorde arrancar vs adjucas arrancar, not adjucas vs vasto lorde arrancar, we have seen an adjucas arrancar can take on a normal vasto lorde, so theres a big difference, anyway, I hope you update more soon

ok, that explains greanma saotome, but did ranma visit the others, or was she there the whole time?

heheheh, stayed away to long, let me guess, ryoga and akane? wait..., no, then she wouldn't be related to saotome...

it does seem good, didn't see the original though. please make longer chapters, as when they're so short I dont have much to say.

well, realise, close to original is all in perspective, homocidal akane and god ranma seem reasonable to them. I like the setup, but isnt a vasto lorde arrancar a lot op in the soul society arc?