Poor Shizune. I love how you had her kiss Ibiki on the cheek; I wonder what happened where Ibiki joined the yakuza? I love Hiruzen's nickname too and how he helps Shizune. I went fangirl mode when I read that the staff knew not to get in Shizune's way; that one poor guy... Omg yes Temari, hit him with your fan again. I love reading about strong women so this chapter with those two taking charge and acting instead of whinning and letting someone else do it really made my day. Way to go Gaara I hope you'll have him slip his guards in the future too; it shows his skills and makes him shine. Naruto's blunt answer about what Cali was like was so him, lol. Awe, Gaara is already developing a crush on Naruto; I wanted to just hug him reading about how his siblings treated him, and when he was crying. I just want to hug him and squeeze him, I found myself tearing up too when he cried. Amazing chapter and amazing story thus far Author-sama. You truly are amazing.

I love how Naruto sticks up for Gaara because it shows tht he's the same charming blonde from the anime who will always do the right thing. I love his language by the way, it made me laugh to read that even Gaara was shocked. I love how Gaara just takes care of the cameras, tapes and threatens the cashier like it's any other day. I love the nickname you gave Jirobo- 'Java-the-hut-looking-***' It practically killed me when I read it that I was rolling over laughing for a couple minutes because it's true and I never realized it. I love how you had Ino be a little badass too because it shows that there are strong women who will back-up their friends too. I hope you can keep going with the strong women in the story, many authors tend to let the women get weaker or whinner and it annoys me to no end. Reading about strong kickass konoichi makes me proud to be a girl.

I wonder why Naruto doesn't want to take theNamikaze name, makes me curious on what you have planned. I love how Naruto was able to shock the Motel owner by speaking japanese so fluently. And I love how he's fine with being half Japanese half American because it shows that Naruto is fine with who he is. I laughed when Naruto caught Gaara, I found it really cute how Gaara reacted to Naruto's teasing.

Hope to read more soon.
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I love Gaara so much. He's such an adorable little BAMF.

I really like this story especially gaara percenality

Omg gaara is so fricken adorable! And hell yeah Ihop! XD please update pleeeeeaaaassssse!

Awesone story idea!

In no way does that classify itself as 'harmless flirting' that's called 'three steps behind rape.'

Great to see you back! Love the chapter so far I like how much they wanna stick close to each other!

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Liking this gaara persona you have going. Hope to read more will be following this story for sure

Awww how sweet. I'm so happy you updated this beauty. Gaara is a cure little panda XD

This story is such fun! I can't wait to see what happens next with it. Poor Gaara needs a lot of hugs.

OMG a new chapter! And it's so long and great and wonderful! You have just made my day, I live your narugaa stories and I'm so glad your back to writing yen again!