Hi. Loving your story! Why? Coz it's one of the few well written, tempo-wise, grammatically, story wise. I like the flashbacks and the cliffhanger was great. I just wished that Rory, after his accusation-rant, would have manned up and be the one to put herself out there, to open up and confess, in an angry outburst all that she regrets and feels. Because he did what he did...the least she could have done is put herself on the line. I hope she does in chapter three in an apology to Caroline. I hope you update real soon! Love, Dela

perfect.

cant wait for more

Please write another chapter, your story is so addictive.

lovely emotion filled fic! and i love the last line! lol poor luke

At first I was worried that you weren't going to tell us first hand what happened immediately after Rory stood up. I was so glad that you did after all! And it was really good! In character and good dialog. That's gotta be Luke that came in the door. I can just hear him saying that.

The part about Luke not knowing how to dress in anything more than flannel was funny. My favourite part, though, was how you wrote the end of this chapter with so much suspense. I didn't see that one coming at all. I thought Jess was just looking at Rory, as if hoping she'd object, and that's why the people gasped. There are so many possibilities of how the next chapter will go! I'm excited to find out!

Aw, Flashback! - my soft spot for flashbacks just got softer! - I really admire your ability to add those past events in just the right place, helping the reader out into just the right mood. Plus, psychologically, I think it was very correct that this was the most probable thing Jess would do if he were about to propose to another woman - he just would have to know, right?
I like this selfish side of Rory you've brought out here. I really do, 'cause I think she has that in her - the town princess crown that let her act pretty selfishly without being held responsible. And, of course, Jess would be the one to call her upon what she did.
I also liked the sense of humor that is just woven into the narration, makes it especially GG:)
So, good work, I'm wondering what's next...

I love how you completely fixed a awkward situation to this amazingness!

more please its so good

Great Chapter & More Please.

I am glad you are extending it! it sucks for Caroline but i like jess's reasoning for leaving. I am glad they are together! Well done!

MORE!

Huh. Poor Rory... & how horrible for Jess & Caroline. Eager to read the reactions in Part 2.
Update soon!

ROFLS (ssilently) My sleeping husband is in the room! Oywiththepoodlesalready, I've never ever seen a more perfect way to show how an "I object" comes about at a wedding! We all knew Rory was standing, but it was utter genius to convince us all that she had no idea...perfect, perfect, perfect. Do we get to see what happens next?