You have, without a doubt, the most unique writing style I have ever read: almost entirely third person with occasional first person narrations, and I it love it...

This is DAMN good. I got the vibes from the comics.

Beautiful, amazing, epic and etc... No words to explain it... It's awesome I didn't know why I haven't read this before! You made me stay up till 6 am damn... Been reading for 6 hours straight or more.. I kinda wished for a sequel... But awesome work. Thank you so much for Sharing this... I really enjoyed it. I had a fun ride :) this was a awesome experience

That was epic! Lol...Man it felt like watching a movie 10/10

Wow... Just wow... I have no words to say.. But wow...

Damn, first of all wow the pool table is strong lol..and finally wow light ... I have respect for you.. This is so epic damn

Jaw drops...that's all I got to say.. And where's the fire man when you need them..

Damn itttt... The feels... Don't you think that's harsh fang.. You tried to kill her 3 times but she still ended wanting you and saving your life :(

Damn it... The feels.. How lightning tried so hard to save her.. And the 'I've got you' thoughts.. It's hurts... Damn it,. I feel like singing the song.. What hurts the most is being soooo close.. Having so much to say... Having you walk away... Ughh

Damn good story, here. DAMN good.

Absolutely amazing! I finished the whole thing in one sitting XD I'm glad i did thou, it was well worth a few hours spent reading it all. What caught my interest initially were the details you put into the descriptions... with regards to the medical procedures they made XIII go through etc. I felt there could have been more details at the end, but i guess it got replaced by the dialogue. The ending was a little bit cliche for me, with Fang leaving without a word then returning again after having completed some huge task for our heroine's benefit, keeping Lightning in suspense. But at least it ended with them together again :) I like the twist of Lightning becoming something more than just a mere human, it was really interesting hehe And the scene where Fang first ravaged Lightning was... wow XD Thanks for writing, hope to see more of your fanfiction works soon!

I'll admit that I enjoyed Feral way more, but I did enjoy this fic as well!

I can only see two things that felt off to me. First, after Fang kissed Light for the first time, Lebreau kinda got kicked to the curb. She didn't really do much when I thought she'd be more involved. And second, I think Light's Asthma should've stuck with her. When she had it, I was constantly on alert wondering how she'd make it out alive if she had a fit. But then...she just went back to her original self.

I could go on and on about the good things, but I'll keep it short. I think the best thing you did was the different mutations you used. They all were different and complimented each other. Very, very nicely done!

I'll get to the oneshot tomorrow!

Dont get me wrong I liked the story I guess I was expecting the Romance to be more heart felt. We know form early on Lighting loved or at the very least liked Fang. Fang is seems for it driven by this heat and the attracion is the after thought or her lige before a weapon. Light is more of and obligationary mate than anything else. Which works well and makes the story so good.
I guess I just wished it was more heartfelt
Anyways great story very enjoyable and interesting to read

cool story

Whelp that's that story finished :) enjoyed it very much and gonna read the extra story now :3 loved their connection and how things played out in the end.