Funny. Very Funny - although I never really considered that Dom would take an interest in Teddy.

Now that was fun! Not for Teddy, of course though.

I love the family scene, with all the legs across the room and the betting. Great.

One typo on Victoire as Victorie - amazed it wasn't more, I had a job with just that one! ;-D
' "I think he said he's been dating Victorie. For three months, too!" '

I love your story summary too. I don't usually comment on those, but this one is comment worthy.
' It is a truth universally acknowledged that any half-werewolf metamorphmagus with turquoise hair must be in want of a Weasley. '

This story made me feel really good, especially after reading "Turning Tables". I believe I prefer Victoire over Dom, so even though the sisters are still fighting, this scene was much more interesting for me. I think it is strange that Teddy seems to care so little, I hoped for a little more loyalty from Remus's son, a little more you-have-my-undying-love, ya know? The betting between George and Ginny was a nice added touch, so typical of Weasley kids.

hehe aww poor Teddy. Nice job incorporating that first line. It was very Austen-ish... I love how you characterized Victoire and Dom. It's true redheaded French girls are scary. He'd be better off just staying away I think hahaha. But I love the betting between George and Ginny. It's something they'd do. And I also love the Harry/Teddy relationship you had going there. I love reading about those two. Nice job :)

Hahahahaha, this made me laugh. Loved all the Weasley love in this and the sisters fighting. Lol.

Great writing.

Oh my goodness, this was wonderful! You've managed to convey a Weasley Family story so very well. You did an amazing job capturing all the crazy insanity of the family while still showing the love that they hold for each other. I especially like Harry's comment on how the combination of red hair and French is just a very bad idea. I honestly have nothing bad to say about this... maybe that the ended felt a bit to choppy for me, but even that is me really looking for something constructive to say. Loved this! It's so very adorably Weasley! :D

Awww! This was really cute :D

I have never read anything that has a Dominique/Teddy/Victoire love triangle thing, and I thought that this was great. I like it how you didn't actually show much about how Dominique took it, and I loved the betting between the Weasley/Potter family! Of course, Lily Luna would try to make a bet with George :) I thought that it was so funny how Ginny then took the bet and was going to split it with Lily... Ah, good times. Oh my gosh, when Teddy took Dominique out to the garden, I was cringing. How embarrassing for Dominique... Anyway, there were no spelling or grammar mistakes, so that just made this even better! Congratulations on writing a brilliant story!