Wow found this by accident but loving it never realised anything went on with Leila an Christian while with ana but it's a long time since I've seen fifty hades. The point that hasn't been addressed is this wasnt a spur of the moment decision he went in search of condoms so he made a conscious decision which makes the betrayal worse it was thought out an intended the fact he lost his erection is not the point

You made Ana such a fuxking idiot.

This story is disgusting. Ana is pathetic.

Of course she has reason to be suspicious. It’s hard to get past the fact that he cheated on her. There was no excuse for him kicking her out of her apartment. I’m assuming you are going on the same premise as the books, he had already dis armed Leila, there was no need for him to participate further, he should have left Taylor there to watch her until Flynn showed up.

Instead he stands there petting her hair, tells Ana to leave then proceeds to bath Leila. I wonder Ana was rushed and she is now suspicious. He caused it himself by caring enough about Leila to ‘try to fix her’. What he did really is inexcusable.

I’m really tired of Ana being so obsessed with. Christian that she keeps forgiving him. I don’t care if it was innocent, as he says, but the fact is the Leila was not out of state, doesn’t he have people checking on her? His having lunch with Elena, knowing how Ana feels about her, and yes it is different that Ethan, Ana never has a sexual relationship with Ethan. Christian’s justification that Ana was mad at him so why not is absurd yet Ana let’s that go too.

Ana is just too obsessed with Christian, that’s not love it’s pathetic. She need to grow a backbone and Christian needs to grow up. They are both so frustrating.

I started reading this chapter while in the car ( passenger) I was so mad getting to our destination, just as Anna got to Christians office. Just Waw

Absolutely loving this story, I’m glad Anna didn’t just forgive Christian, even though they belong together, hope they end up together ( but hope she makes him pay) I’m so mad at him. Lol

Sure I like Ethan, but I'm Christian Grey all the way along with Anastasia, besides,Ethans best fit for him is Mia

Ok enough of Ana punishing Christian. Ana should've told Ethan, Elliott, Kate and Jose to butt out of there problems. They have to work on it themselves and she's hurt Christian enough. Ana loves Christian and she always will. Sure I get she was hurt and she wanted to punish him, but when she confessed she never had sex with Ethan, then it should've went to where they just needed to mend there relationship and not bring in everyone else. I understand and get this is your story, but give Christian a break. He knew he was wrong to cheat on Ana, but he just was in a weak position.

Damn, If I was Ana and Christian, I would've told Kate and Elliott to leave.

Boy you're good.. She never has sex or made love with Ethan, but I do love how you made it to where she got back at Christian for his cheating..good he deserves it

I had read a similar story a long time ago. I don't know if it was this one,and it was changed,or if it was by another person, but in the end here on chapter 1 where she asked him if he had sex with leila and the answer was no and it went onto like the movie and book version..I like this one too just to let you know..I'm curious if you're the one I read along time ago and then decided to change it. Let me know,pls

What ever the age of the writer , its the content that draws a following . Even thow you have used someone ells ideas for the plot you have captured what most of us love about fifty. I for one just say thank you and well done !

Will He i mean Christian be a man or a whinny little bitch who is selfish . Only time will tell . We he go to Mrs Robinson again ?

Very well done ... Thank you !