| Reviews for The Ancient |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 9/11/2015 Intriguing |
| Guest chapter 1 . 1/2/2014 nice "feel-good" story :) |
 LiveAndLetRain chapter 1 . 5/16/2013 This is a nice little oneshot! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/22/2013 nice. this is well thought out and clever. |
| World Travelling Chibitaku chapter 1 . 4/7/2013 OMG THIS WAS SO GOOD ASDJFLK;ASFDJA;FKSD; CAN YOU MAKE A SEQUEL TO THIS STORY? IT WAS JUST SO AWESOME AFJDALFDAL;F |
| Cylon One chapter 1 . 3/3/2013 This was a sure good one. Hope it's okay to wonder what Natasha did on the last day after Bunny and Jack left. |
| Doppler Effect chapter 1 . 1/17/2013 Oohhh, that was a really cool idea. |
| Guest chapter 1 . 12/30/2012 This made me smile. |
| A Little Lost 1 chapter 1 . 12/28/2012 Great Story! |
| XiaoWing chapter 1 . 12/22/2012 Like it :) |
| Crysania Fay chapter 1 . 12/13/2012 That was really cool. It's really an interesting thought. |
| Firehedgehog chapter 1 . 12/8/2012 sweet |
| RaychDZeros chapter 1 . 12/8/2012 I LOVE THIS! |
| Sunny Lighter chapter 1 . 12/7/2012 Haha, this is great, poor Natasha must be so confused |
