magnificant!

So much sweetness. you really do capture their "lost, and lonely boys but now we have a friend and we'll never let them go" vibe. I give this one-shot 5 stars!

aww, they are so cute together, and those descriptions:the little god of mischief, and the boy that comes with the wind. love it

I love it, They meke a cute pair! Up for a sequel?

aah! i want a sequel with jack and adult!loki from the avengers movie...

Awwww! I love! Little Loki and Jack... those two together would be hilarious! Two tricksters!

Can you make a story about adult Loki meeting jack?
Where Loki is winning against the fight of the avengers but stopped because it suddenly snowed and he remembers jack.
And jack doesn't know what's going on nor that Loki is evil and was happily surprised that his friend remembers :D and then left after without knowing Loki is evil and Loki just stops the battle? :D

Amazing work on this :)

Great! I hope you write another one, and it would be interesting to see what Loki thinks of Jack when he is a Guardian and Loki an adult...

this is so sweet 3
they fit each other perfect! they could be the best friends if they ever meet :)
Your story is very well written! (as long as I can talk about that, english is not my mother tongue)

Lovely. :)

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Daaaaaaaaaawwwwwwww! Too cute for words!

I like the idea of Kid Loki and Jack hanging out together. Hope that there's more to come!

heh, evil loki can't see him