I wish this would update, it's such a good story and it makes me laugh so hard! This is totally awesome! Please don't abandon it.

Please update this story! Its too funny to not continue!

This is one of the most hilarious things I’ve ever read!~

Ok. Finding this was a surprise gem. This was a hilarious, entertaining and heartwarming chapter all in one. It's been a few years since you published this, but I just wanted to say... thank you for writing. :)

I laughed my head off. So hilarious, so realistic, so meaningful. Mustangs after the best. Doctor is hilarious. Greed was put in there just right. Also Scooby. The best. I love references!

gosh i remember when i first read this years ago. i genuinely was so enamored by your writing and arlina. i was so impressed with how much detail you were putting into telling the story and i was so excited to see what would happen next. i think this was the first fic i was really heartbroken over when i realized you hadn't updated it in years haha. i feel like ive pretty much outgrown stuff like this but i still love this and come back to it when im feeling nostalgic. i just wanted to tell you that i really appreciated this story. i dont know if you read these anymore, but i hope that wherever you are that you're happy and living a good life

much thanks
dan :-)

This was funny to read! The only points I give the OC is that she's amusing and the way she messes with people is funny. But most of the time, she's just freaking annoying! God, shut up about your damn phone! Everytime she talks about her phone, like she's going to die without, she so FUCKING annoying! I just want to push! You're in the 1910's, it's not like you have internet. Throw the shit away and get a new life! Sheesh! I've never found anyone so damn annoying and irritating! She's just lucky the way she messes with Edward is amusing as hell! That's the only good point sh gets.

This. is. Hilarious! I can't stop laughing!

I kinda want to hear Arlina explain Naruto.

Honestly, even though you described Doctor Keith, all I can think of is "SWEET MOTHER THERESA ON THE HOOD OF A MERCEDES BENZ, YOU SOUD LIKEBA MAJESTIC FING EAGLR!Keith.

Please update!

Please tell me she keeps the dog.

awww i want more!

I hope you update soon! I had only read partway through chapter one before knowing that i needed to read the rest of it, the completed form of it! I dont know when you last updated, i think i recall that it was years ago and since i cant go back to check right now, im assuming its around that. So, i want with all if my being that you return to this story! Ive read many books and fanfictions and all that jazz, and i have to say this is so well written and everyone is in character so well that this is the first true fanfiction i think i have ever read! If there is anything you need to get back on this story, let me know and i will do what i can to make it so! I dont care how many follows or favorites you have, this is a masterfully written and created fanfiction and it just must be completed! You are a rockstar! PM me if you want any help at all! But hopefully its not a PM saying that this will forever be incomplete and destroy my hopes and dreams of this work of art ever being continued and completed in the amazing and thoughtful way you write and create!

Oh god! This chapter totally showed Ed as a bro. With all this shit I can barely think of Ed as anything other than her brother! And what the actual fuck! Sloth? Sloth is a horrible name! Envy is an interesting name! Greed...like Greed Island..? I have a stupid headache because of Greed! Ed is totally awesome for getting Doc back. Doc is seriously something. Is he connected to the people whose voice he can understand?