It came out right absolutely, nice job and I can't wait to read more

My only complaint is that it's too short. I wanted you to keep going as you've got a good style. Very good message here and well done.

Just beautiful their brotherhood is wonderful, I love a lot my little brothers and I know how is to give and take support on them, I love the turtles ninjas and your stories all of those are amazing

I really liked that story! Good job!

Love it a lot!

Brotherly fluff. I love it. ]]. Great job! I really enjoyed this story!

What doesn't kill you makes you stronger definetly aplied for for the Gaunlet ep. Though it could also be, what nearly kills you in this case. Great story!

You nailed the upbeat style of the show well here, the Turtles bonding over tv is very sweet, and Splinter's words are encouraging and relatable. Fine work here overall

About time :D . Even though there are a lot of awesome writers here, it seems that something is missing, well, for me. After all you are one of my favorites XD.
I agree with you, the chapter was totally thrilling and hilarious, as always. When I saw that you posted this story I was telling myself: "I have to find the chapter to understand the story!" I was quite desperate as you can see... XD
At the beginning of the chapter, I loved how Leo hugged Raph, this Leo has all the virtues I love and at the same time he does things he hardly did in the old cartoons! Just adorable.
A good friend of mine helped me with that and I just have seen that chapter, now I am ready to read your story... thanks goodness XD.
When Shredder picked Leo up and attacked him with his gauntlet I swear I stopped breathing, Leo and his brothers were lucky and the Shredder got distracted... they were so lucky...
I understand why Leo is having nightmares here.
It is a great experience to go with Leo all the way when he is growing, maturing and learning how to be an awesome leader, but he has everything he needs inside his heart and his mind it is so cute to see him behaving like a real teenager, it is great.
The scene in the couch was full of love, they must look real cute for Master Splinter who will always will see them (sometimes) as little kids.
That was only a fight, but they will win the war, someday.
Loved the story, Rose will be waiting the next one, in the meantime I will watch the episodes again and again :D . I still hate Captain Ryan.

I liked it. Especially your title ;-) I was surprised at how calm Raph was with Leo, but it made sense, seeing how shook up they all were from the fight. That is an awesome episode! Hope to read more from you :-)