I wish there was more to this.

I NEED MORE!

This is a brilliant idea and I do wish you pursue it. You have a smooth writing style that is easy to follow. I enjoyed this.

YOU SHALL BE FED! BUT! IN RETURN YOU MUST UPDATE AND CONTINUE THIS STORY!...

please

I love this. Is the more?

brilliant!~~~~~~

Okay. I got to see how this ends.

I don't usually read anything involving male pregnancy, but Loki is a special case because he has actually given birth a few times in the original mythology. I'm quite sure he always took the form of a female for that, but close enough.

Yeah! But… Loki is such an A-Hole. I love it, though!

ton histoire est bien faite et bien organisé;et je pense que la suite va étre du genre thor et lady sif
vont aller voirent jack frost le fils de loki pour savoir s'il va étre comme son pè tout cas je
serais curieuse de connaitre la suite de ton histoire. je te souhaite bonne chance!

I like this. I like this very very very much.

Knowing Thor, if Loki didn't set some ground rules or something, he;s probably gonna blab to Sif and the Warriors Three/Avengers/S.H.I.E.L.D. (before or after the fact). Heimdall would tell Odin.
S.H.I.E.L.D. would lock Jack up. (Possibly.)
Tony and Bruce would probably experiment (or try to) on Jack.
I'm sure Clint would have a passive-aggressive reaction to the news.
Natasha and Steve...to be honest, I'm not so sure about them.
Thor and Frigga would probably be in "My nephew/grandson!" mode.
Odin is...Odin.
(Reasons why I think this story is better left alone if you so choose for no understandable reason. Sorry if I wasted your time.)

Gaaah! You have to do more where Jack finds out he's Lokis son. That would be hula riots and fantastic!

next chapter please. It is a very good start and peaks my interest.

great start can't wait for more