I really liked all of the little details in this :) And the dialogue was very well done. I could definitely hear Killian saying it.

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Have I already told you your a really good author, and about to be held for murdur?

One of the most awesome fics I've ever read. Loved it.

This is soooo good. I always wanted Emma to tell anyone (especially Killian) about what Neal did to her. I totally support punching Neal's face for it.

one of the best canon divergence I've ever read, and so well-written!

I know you don't write fanfics anymore or watch ouat anymore, but honestly I still feel like I have to write this review and thank you for writing this and all of your other cs fics, because they are just wonderful and they make me so happy. I was rereading a bunch of old cs fics and I was just reminded of how amazing your writing is and how much you've contributed to the fandom. Again, thank you for writing this story.

I'M LEAVING BECAUSE THIS STORY HURT ME IN WAYS THAT WEREN'T POSSIBLE FIFTEEN MINUTES AGO! Seriously, I feel like I say this in all the stories I've read, but this one - THIS ONE - was so in character and so REAL that I'm like flabbergasted! and LEAVING STILL BECAUSE IT WAS CUTE (well, not cute in a cute way, but cute in a different way that cannot be explained). Back to serious though, great development here with all the characters and I loved the bits with Snow and Emma, Ruby and Emma, just as much as I loved the Killian and Emma moments.

Excellent! A lovely story about love and revenge and how people can change over three hundred years.

One of the reasons I really like this fic is because you made it so raw. I could almost feel the melancholy, the bitterness and deep wounds. Beautiful really.

Sincerely one of the best Captain Swan fics i have ever read. I love the parallelism between Hook and Emma, I just wish you had included more Henry. Keep writing.

You have the most beautiful way of putting words together to create such feelings...

Just love Hook being all bristley and protective. Yay captain swan!

Excellent story. I liked this scenario better than the two of them fighting on the opposite sides of each other. Bravo! Well written piece from start to finish.

I love everything about this. so well done.

That was simply wonderful. _ My CaptainSwan feels all a flutter. Thank you for writing this. Definitely not to long cause I want more. _