This was a really nice story ;). Thoughtful, funny, I just love it! Especially I liked the scene where Thomas saves Edward from dying and declares his love for him. It's somehow strange that there are so few stories about Thomas and Edward (or I just don't find them... ;)). I'm certainly going to read the sequel story!

I found this story the other day and read it all in one go, it was three in the morning but I can safely say it was worth staying up for! That was really great and my god im sooo pleased that Edward didn’t die! I had such high hope that Edward and Thomas would be together in that episode (and they’d be so perfect!) but the ending…oh god the ending killed me! But im so glad your Edward didn’t have the same faith! In such a lovely in insight to what could have been! And you portrayed them so well! Thank you so much for writing this. And now I am off to read the sequel!

:) i thought the ending was nice but now i know you're making a sequel, I'm really excited! you are a really good writer, keep writing more great stuff! Xxxx

P.S.

If someone want to read another story about Thomas and Edward and their life together after the hospital, I will recommend LED HOME /works/505906/chapters/890004

Nice to see a positive and happy ending. Hope they will have a happy life together.

Yes you should continue or write a new story. This was fantastic so don't give it up! Please!

Wow! This story is so beautiful! I love the relationship between Thomas and Edward, and the ending is perfect! Few grammatical and spelling errors, but other than that, wonderful! :D x

Im not sure how to respond to comments so ill just replie here.
Don-V: i was actually planning on making a kinda sequel to this, but i wasnt sure if people would be intrested in it, but now that i know that someone wants more, ill write more :)

Arhh now im really buzzed about what i could do next, yes thomas and edward and his family would be like incredi-angst!

I always hoped thomas would end up as someone's valet/husband!

Is that it!? Oh.
But..
... Eh?
Are you serious!? You can't just end it at that! Oh :( I was just ecstatic because of the speedy update! And thomas' suggestion! Its obvious its such a huge sacrifice to him because he never wanted to get back in service.. Still, he is willing to do it for Edward. its beautiful.. Oh do find it in your heart to continue with this! You've gone so far! There could be a lot of drama/angst hurt/comfort what with edward's parents and his brother.. What with the obstacles they might face when their son brings his ex-corporal/doctor home to be a VALET

Awh this chapter warms up my insides! Finally! Thomas has someone he loves who loves him back. Beautiful! I can't wait to see what happens after Edward gets discarded from the hospital... Where will he go? Would he live with Thomas...? Hm.
I'm also very happy about the turn of events! You had me a moment there! I thought Edward was really going to die! Sigh, thank godness he is safe this time!

Thanks heaven, Thomas was there in time!

And he had to explain his reaction to Edward! So happy for them both!

Just read this all - it's very good, though I'm worried about Edward! Looking forward to the next chapter. :)

Oh no, don't let Edward die, please please let Thomas find him in time to save him.
Please update soon, I cannot stand a cliffhanger like this.

Firstly I should apologise for not reviewing since the first chapter. You are going at a good pace with this, best that they are both unsure and wary of "making the first move". Nice to get Thomas's point of view.
BlackRose