Ahhhh loves this. Fantastic job. I don’t think I’ve ever read a story with these two like this that I wished was the canon story, but I wish this story was! Lovely job. Thank you for writing this.

Damn, this chapter hit me in the gut. Great reaction from Shizuo, that was fuckig heart wrenching.

It's been like two years since I read this but it was written so well I can remember a lot and it makes me sad to read but you keep pulling me into the story!

Liking the story so far, although both Izaya and Shizuo are ooc. Also, just a tip, it's a school night as Shizuo was invited over for dinner and yet they somehow managed to watch 10 episodes of an anime? And work for 2 hours on homework? Just what time are they having dinner? Midnight? Lol.

Other than that, I'm totally loving Izaya's parents confronting Izaya that he has the hots for Shizuo lol. Too funny.

The ending to me, was lacking a bit. Very cliche in that whole, The Notebook, kinda way lol. I kind of wish that the story ended with Shizuo forgiving Izaya but not getting back together with him. Because what Izaya did was seriously fucked up. I felt that if Shizuo forgave Izaya but decided not to get back together with him, it would have portrayed Shizuo as having grown strong thanks to Izaya. They could have remained friends, I was just disappointed that Shizuo was so forgiving after 6 years.

But then again, the sex scene was super hot. Shizuo was such a hot tease what with sharing he knows how to play with himself lol and Izaya being a master at blowjobs? lol idk if I would love that or hate it knowing how he got so good at them. Ugh but the dirty talk was so hot. Overall, the sex scene was so passionate. I like how you can see the change that 6 years of experience (Shizuo with his own body, and Izaya with the whole world lol) really showed. I really like this story. As I said, there were pros and cons but overall, you did a good job. Thank you! (:

I'm a bit curious as to why Izaya used a condom this time. Was it for lubrication? Just thought it abbot strange.

Not meaning to be rude but this could have been a lot shorter.

I loved your story! I've never read a story that had fluff IN the smut; it made me gush so much i thought i would pop! -

oh my god this story was soooooo beautiful I'm actually sobbing right now
my heart hurts

M c.f. .crash.:).bwfakufuygffhbefjgvfefdvnfkebfevfvne I LOVE U SO MUCH PLEASE THIS WAS ONE OF THE BEST STORIES I EVER READ PLEASE CREATE A SEQUEL!

I hardly ever cry but this was so FUCKIN SAD IM CRYING RIGHT NOW!

That's one of the best smuts I've ever read and I have read a variety of yaoi smuts from different anime...trust me XDXD

Ereri and JeanMarco from AoT to Lawlight from Deathnote

From USUK and Getaly (Germany x Italy) in Hetalia to Makoharu and RinRei from Free!Eternal Summer

From Kanato and Kide From Tokyo Ghoul to Mikaomi and Shizaya From Durarara!

From Yatone from Noragami to Sebastiel (Sebastian x Ciel) from Black Butler

I have mAny more but u will have to check out my WAttpad account t to find out more!

Here's the link :

user/L_Ryuzaki24

If it doesn't work just either type my Wattpad name in Google and click on it or if u have an Wattpad account just search me up in the story and authors search bar at the top

SO FUCKIN KAWAII! TEN OUT OF FUCKIN TEN!

HELL YES OF COURSE ME LIKE!

ME: IZAYA...BEAT SHIZUO's DAD'S ASS FOR MOI I SHIP YOU TWO!

IZAYA: *Salutes and grins at himself, head turned* Sure...he made Shizuo cry...didn't he?

Me: *squeals inwArdly* Shizaya is love, Shizaya is life!

ADMITTED IT, DIDN'T YOU, YOU SON OF A BITCH!