I was weary of her already before but now that I've read the note. Well that has bad idea that hopefully will turn out alright.

maravilloso escribe mas no pares!

This was a really great story your ideas were unique as well as being wrote out so well and this last chap warp this story up so nicely.
And that bonus sex just top it all off
Thank you for the story-fireworks

Arwww bunny is jacks hero at the end and bunny and jack lemon *blush*
I also have a feeling we will be seeing Sei in the next chap hope am wrong.

Sei is so evil and kinda of a slapper.
And now we know the In's & out's of the cruse and your idea's for it was really interesting.
Jacks going on a rampage so will bunny be coming to the rescue and tell jack he lives him?
On to the next chap!.

That lemon sooooo hot and I wonder if the spell is now broken and also that I love you really did fall on deaf ears *sweatdrops*

So we get to learn alittle more about the spell and I really like your idea for it so far.
Yummy more jackrabbit goodness

This was a interesting chap and jack was really coming into bunny and poor jack must feel do confused.

A really good plot line going on and I like how you added Japanese.
I really like your OC Sei and looking forward to finding out more.
I can't wait to find out what idea you have for what's going to happen to jack.

was an excellent story, I congratulate you. I really like the sex scenes, I like that you handle it as is, do not avoid addressing the issue. many do.

keep writing. kisses

Reading your story for the second time this year and enjoying it like the first time

Good job! I love this story and the plot :) very unique and thought out.

O/O

*politely asks for a sequel while using cute puppy dog eyes* pllllllllllllllleeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeaaaaaaaaaaaaaass ssssssseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee?

Amazing story. Just the right pacing. Not rushed or dragged. The action was great and those smut scene. Holy crap I feel like such a prevert. Love this so much!