Reviews for Bits and Pieces
cutterjohns chapter 11 . 3/20/2014
Stump and Mandy! Now there's a relationship I've never seen explored before. I think you did a really nice job giving such a vague character personality, since the movie left room to do pretty much anything with her and the relationship she had with Stump. It also explains why he fell for her so hard, and why he feels so bitter about the whole ordeal. Poor guy. He wasn't kidding… Mandy was, in the end, just a bitch.

Hate you? Never! *hugs*
Dance Elle Dance chapter 10 . 8/12/2013
D'aww! How cute! I was really excited to find that you'd attempted the pairing of Letch and girl!Stump. These two are just so cute together and you've done a good job writing them! :) I particularly liked Knots and Rest, but all of the little segments were very nicely done!

(And GoggleLynn? I eagerly await seeing what you decide to do with that pair!)

Can't wait to see what you write next! :)
cutterjohns chapter 10 . 8/12/2013
OMG I LOVED THIS SO MUCH! X3 It means so much to me that you wrote for this pairing! You captured the dynamic I had in mind for them perfectly, along with the characterization of fem!Stump. :D I'm not even sure which one was my favourite, but I'm leaning towards 'Knots'. *Loved* that you had Letch refer to her as "kid". Made my heart flutter. X) But they were all awesome and I think you did a really nice job! I'm really flattered that you decided to give these two a shot!

Writer's block for Watch Me? Ouch. I feel you there. :( Winds of Change hasn't been updated since June, so this was really the kick in the rear I needed to get started on the new chapter, lol. A Goggle/Lynn? Colour me intrigued... ;)
Dance Elle Dance chapter 9 . 8/8/2013
Very cool chapter. I've always loved the fifty sentences/scenes kind of fics and this one was just awesome! I really liked that you included characters that don't get much love in the fandom, like Sarge and Spitter and Grabber and so on. I loved all of these! But if I had to pick my top ten (because I love lists so very much, lol) I would go with: Dog, Beef, Forget, Quirky, Sophisticated, Microwave, Ripple, Napping, Detective, and Dress Code. Gah, they were all so cute, though! It was so hard to pick those ten! XD

Super excited to read more from you. This little collection you have going here is just simply *amazing*. :)
Dance Elle Dance chapter 8 . 8/7/2013
Aww! Great chapter. I love reading about Rory and Stabber. Rory is such a well-developed OC and you just write her interactions with Stabber so nicely. I think my favorite of this set of little scenes was Fisticuffs, followed closely by Tool Shed. Gah, I'm in awe of your writing skills! XD Amazing work!
Dance Elle Dance chapter 7 . 8/7/2013
Ooooh. Really cool chapter! It was neat to see how you mixed all the pairings up! I think my favorite might have been the StabberMissy. Just because I thought it was so cool how you included the medical knowledge and everything into it and it was so...*sensual* for lack of a better word. I did love the LizardRory, which was really just a simple moment done beautifully - all of your stuff is just beautifully written, really!

GoggleLynn was *awesome*. I think that one was probably my second favorite, right after the StabberMissy. I was so excited to see that you wrote for Goggle, because I just love him, and the setting you had for that little scene was just great! I don't read much femslash, but the inclusion of AmberBrenda was a nice one, and not the obvious femslash pairing choice at all! It was very playful and fun.

And JupiterEthel! What a great pair those two make. I love how you took a simple moment like her wondering about his scars and making it just so...well, amazing. All of these little scenes are, though! :)

On to review the next one! So excited to learn that you'd updated this!
Guest chapter 9 . 8/4/2013
I like #13 falling :D that sounds like its Gibbs be interesting...though I do wanna read a story about goggle cuz there's hardly any about him :'/ *conflicted*
cutterjohns chapter 9 . 7/31/2013
I seriously can't decide which one was my favourite. XD I loved all of them, and all the different pairings featured here. Some of them had me grinning, others really tugged at my heartstrings (particularly 'Heartache'... I felt *so* bad for Bob and wanted to give him a hug :( ). I was really touched that you included girl!Stump here and the pregnancy scenario for Hades and Ethel. Was the final sentence supposed to imply their child had just been born? Or was that one of his children from the films? Either way, it really intrigued me.

I was glad you decided to included lesser-used characters as well, such as Cyst, Grabber, Sarge, Spitter, etc. They deserve a bit of recognition. Loved that you included snippets from the films, as well, and that you focused on other relationships other than strictly romantic ones, such as Clyde's bond his parents and Jeb's friendship with Ruby. :) I might try a technique like this sometime, because I really like what you did with this! Can't wait to see what scenario you pick for next time, because I wouldn't be able to decide.
cutterjohns chapter 8 . 7/31/2013
Yay for Stabber and Rory! As usual, your descriptions were perfect. You have a way of writing that just sucks readers in. :) My favourite was probably 'Appearence'. So cute!
Guest chapter 7 . 7/27/2013
Um :$...femslash...but everything else was good! I really liked moonlight _ missing rory and stabber though :c
cutterjohns chapter 7 . 7/26/2013
Your writing style is so beautiful, damn it! I wish I could describe things as well as you can! XD I, for one, *love* that you mixed up the pairings, as I have a tendency to do that myself. They were all really cute!

I'm normally not into Lizard with OCs (I used to enjoy it but it's gotten overdone now) but I love Rory and think she's extremely well-developed character, so in this case I'll make an exception. Besides, she fits in so well with the canon characters, I didn't notice a difference. :) You did a great job describing her voice and the music, I felt like I was really listening to it!

Ah, I knew I wasn't the only one who considered Stabber/Missy! ;) The two medics! Loved how he decided to put his knowledge to use for smex! Who knows - maybe she'll return the favour sometime? She's certainly capable. X)

Goggle/Lynn! That pair has been a long-time coming, IMO, considering how long the first movie has been out now. And the descriptions you used were absolutely gorgeous. I thought both were very IC. It would be just like Goggle to hold back, and just like Lynn to draw him right back in. X3

THANK YOU FOR WRITING HHE FEMSLASH! That made me *so* happy. I've been dying to read some for this fandom, you have no idea. The obvious pair would've been Missy/Amber, given their interactions in the movie, so I think it's cool you put her with Brenda instead. Very unique (and hot) pair!

And Jupiter/Ethel! Another pair I've considered for a long time that has *finally* been done! They were so IC and so cute together, too! Especially the part with Ethel fretting over how Jupe got his scars. That's totally something I could see her doing. :) The ending made me go "awwww". Was Ethel's scar a reference to what Lizard did in the movie? Only less fatal? Either way, it was very plausible.

Thanks for the update! I absolutely adore this story, and can't wait to see what you have in store for Rory and Stabber next chapter!
Dance Elle Dance chapter 6 . 6/8/2013
Thank goodness for Carling telling me that this was updated! I am so sorry I haven't reviewed sooner. I found this chapter to be really fun - this whole fic is just loads of fun, really! I think my favorites were Mambo (D'aww! I don't think I've ever read Hades in such a civil capacity before! And the Hathel mention was adorable); Experience (I just think the image of Missy and Rory having girl talk is such a fun one); and then Preference was *so cute*. Pluto, you sweetheart! XD I just love this collection of yours and can't wait to read more!
FloodFeSTeR chapter 6 . 6/1/2013
i love for this one
FloodFeSTeR chapter 5 . 6/1/2013
i think this one is just to sweet, even if they are hideous freaks...well to some people at least
FloodFeSTeR chapter 4 . 6/1/2013
Hades scares me...
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