| Reviews for The First Hit |
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  Guest chapter 1 . 12/16/2019 Cute |
 kkriiiiiiiii chapter 1 . 2/13/2018 I loved the concept. And this story was too cute. |
| sand beneath our feet chapter 1 . 7/26/2017 I love this |
| Doctor Mayfair chapter 1 . 3/5/2017 So sweet! Loved it! |
| leizapotter chapter 1 . 3/1/2016 I LOVE James in this one! He is so sweet and caring and I adore him ️ |
| AvilaAddy chapter 1 . 2/5/2016 :) |
| Gra Evans chapter 1 . 11/18/2015 soooo cute |
| Mentathial chapter 1 . 9/3/2015 wow |
| MythologicalMango chapter 1 . 6/10/2015 Aww. :) |
| Akamarackus chapter 1 . 5/18/2015 i love that "maybe she should punch people more often." heh. maybe she should. this actually seems canon to me. hmm. i like it. good job, you awesome person, you! |
| MissAuChocolat chapter 1 . 2/12/2015 I can only repeat myself. This is Great stuff and I Love your ways of showing them. 3 |
| SunnyZim chapter 1 . 9/10/2014 Loved it as I do all your James/lily fics! I do hope you're planning on finishing 'Quiet Summer' sometime? I loved it so much and long to read more! ;-) |
| FlameFeather4549 chapter 1 . 8/26/2014 I love it! This is such a cute story! It's a really nice story idea, and you did such a great job: Everyone was in character, it was really interesting to read. I really enjoyed this! I love seeing Lily's perspective of things, and James was great... I especially liked the part: "He didn't. There's no way - but he won't look at her, has his shoulders hunched as if expecting her to tell him off, as if bracing himself. He leans backward without care, almost at the precipice of falling, and she feels her eyes sting with tears." |
| Ansy Pansy aka Panz chapter 1 . 1/18/2014 Ohh this is so lovely but more than lovely. It's tough and strong and funny and different. |
| thegirlwhoflies chapter 1 . 9/27/2013 I think that's the best prank James ever did, in his opinion :) hahaha LOVE IT! |
