Very nice story but why do you writers always leave things on a cliff hanger i hate cliff hangers Ha ha! thanks for a very good read.

Please finish this!

Yes I know I pm'd you yesterday about this story, but I got the title slightly wrong. My bad.
Anyway I really need you to continue it. With the dirty of real crime fighting Jane And Lisbon stories out there these days that aren't mired down in the bog of Jane's past misdemeanors against Lisbon and multiple babies, your's is one of the few I'm truly enjoying ... if only it would carry on.

Thanks so much for updating this. I love this story and that chapter was no exception. Great plot, dialogue and characterisation and I love your writing style. My heart broke a little bit for Sylas's crumpling face only a few lines into meeting him. Intriguing development with Tom Wilcox dead- I confess I had to go back to the start to remember who he was! I'm still not at all sure what the murders mean, but I feel it's safe to assume I should be very worried about Lisbon. Thanks again :)

Can't tell you how pleased I was to see another chapter. Your characterizations of Jane and Lisbon are fine-grained, utterly realistic, especially Jane's internal thoughts. And there's a dangerous new-but-RJ-related serial killer at work (and working overtime). Hoping for more soon, both on this story and perhaps other Mentalist stories. Thank you.

Things are getting even more interesting! I cannot wait to see what happens next- keep it up!

please continue this!

really like this story. are you planning on continuing? either way, thanks for sharing :)

Oh!

This is really nicely done; I cannot wait to see what happens next! :)

Brilliant story. You've done such a terrific job of illuminating the emotional battering that the drowning and its aftermath caused. And now there's a RJ disciple messing with them, as well as RJ himself(?). Thank you.

Hope you suffer no permanent problem from taking pity on your readers in preference to doing your school work.

like it !

I am really enjoying your story!

You have provided very interesting insights into Jane and Lisbon's points of view of Jane's fugue period. Lisbon's inner dialogue in particular is fascinating.

Not only that, the RJ case is extremely intriguing and original. I am very interested to know what will happen next. Looking forward to reading the next chapter!

Just started reading this story. I am enjoying it, there's some nice touches.

Oh, this is certainly an interesting story. I like the way you write. Thanks for not giving up on it, I just found it now (new to the fandom, kinda). Thank you for sharing!